Hi,Jessie...Please Check my homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jessie!
I'm sorry that I submmitted my Friday homework late,too.
However,I'm happy to do my homework.
If you don't mind,can you tell me your age?^^
Anyway,please check my homework.
ESSAY: What was the weirdest food you've ever eaten? Describe it and why do you consider it as the weirdest one?
I am usually particular about food.
However,7 years ago I have eaten a ray at first.
Its smell was so terrible.But,Its taste was really good.
If I have a chance to eat it,I really want to eat it again with you^^.
However,It seems like to be hard.Because it is too expensive.
Thanks for reading my homework! Have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for spending a little of your time writing about your experience.
I am happy to read it.
I think you are talking about hongeo, right?
Anyway, I also like to eat with you, but let\'s try other food. ^^
I think I can\'t eat it, if ever. kkkk!
Well, I am actually 28 years old. ^^
Enjoy this day!
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hi Jessie!
>> Correct!I\'m sorry that I submmitted my Friday homework late,too.
>> I\'m sorry that I submitted my Friday homework late too.However,I\'m happy to do my homework.
>> Correct!If you don\'t mind,can you tell me your age?^^
>> Correct!Anyway,please check my homework.>> Correct!ESSAY: What was the weirdest food you\'ve ever eaten? Describe it and why do you consider it as the weirdest one?I am usually particular about food.
>> Correct!However,7 years ago I have eaten a ray at first.
>> However, 7 years ago I have eaten a ray for the first time.Its smell was so terrible.
>> Correct!
OR>> It smells terrible.
But,Its taste was really good.>> But, its taste was really good.OR>> But, it tastes good.If I have a chance to eat it,I really want to eat it again with you^^.
>> If I have a chance to eat it again, I really want to eat it with you^^.However,It seems like to be hard.
>> However, it seems like it is hard.
Because it is too expensive.
>> Correct!Thanks for reading my homework!
>> Correct!
Have a nice day!
>> Correct!
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