Hi,Jessie...Please Check my homework.

2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi Jessie! I'm sorry that I submmitted my Friday homework late,too. However,I'm happy to do my homework. If you don't mind,can you tell me your age?^^ Anyway,please check my homework. ESSAY: What was the weirdest food you've ever eaten? Describe it and why do you consider it as the weirdest one? I am usually particular about food. However,7 years ago I have eaten a ray at first. Its smell was so terrible.But,Its taste was really good. If I have a chance to eat it,I really want to eat it again with you^^. However,It seems like to be hard.Because it is too expensive. Thanks for reading my homework! Have a nice day!

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Hello there! Thanks for spending a little of your time writing about your experience. I am happy to read it. I think you are talking about hongeo, right? Anyway, I also like to eat with you, but let\'s try other food. ^^ I think I can\'t eat it, if ever. kkkk! Well, I am actually 28 years old. ^^ Enjoy this day! See you later! ~T. Jessie~ Hi Jessie! >> Correct!I\'m sorry that I submmitted my Friday homework late,too. >> I\'m sorry that I submitted my Friday homework late too.However,I\'m happy to do my homework. >> Correct!If you don\'t mind,can you tell me your age?^^ >> Correct!Anyway,please check my homework.>> Correct!ESSAY: What was the weirdest food you\'ve ever eaten? Describe it and why do you consider it as the weirdest one?I am usually particular about food. >> Correct!However,7 years ago I have eaten a ray at first. >> However, 7 years ago I have eaten a ray for the first time.Its smell was so terrible. >> Correct! OR>> It smells terrible. But,Its taste was really good.>>  But, its taste was really good.OR>> But, it tastes good.If I have a chance to eat it,I really want to eat it again with you^^. >> If I have a chance to eat it again, I really want to eat it with you^^.However,It seems like to be hard. >> However, it seems like it is hard. Because it is too expensive. >> Correct!Thanks for reading my homework! >> Correct! Have a nice day! >> Correct!

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