Hi Joan

Hi Joan I'm [이름][이름]. I decide to write a diary sometimes. Because I need to enhace my writing skill. Actually, I have written e-mails to vendor who is a manufacturer in Germany. But, I feel to difficult to write in Elglish so that I have written e-mail very short. So, I will write to you e-mail or my diary from now. I need to your help to enhance my writing skill. In advance, Thank you. Good night

Hello [이름] [이름]! ^^ Glad to read your composition in here. Sure thing, writing helps improve your skills. Here are the corrections I made on your message. I\'d be glad to help you in any way I could. T\' Joan Hi Joan >> Hi, Joan. I\'m [이름][이름]. >> CORRECT!I decide to write a diary sometimes. >> I decided to write a diary whenever I get the chance. Because I need to enhace my writing skill. >> CORRECT AS A PHRASE (NEVER START WITH BECAUSE, IT IS A CONJUNCTION) YOU MAY SAY: >> I decided to write a diary whenever I get the chance because I need to enhance my writing skill. Actually, I have written e-mails to vendor who is a manufacturer in Germany. >> Actually, I have written e-mails to a certain vendor (salesperson; marketer are better terms) who is a manufacturer in Germany. But, I feel to difficult to write in Elglish so that I have written e-mail very short. >>But, I felt it to be too difficult for me to write in English soI have written very short e-mail.So, I will write to you e-mail or my diary from now. >>So, I will send you e-mail or my diary from now on.I need to your help to enhance my writing skill. >>CORRECT!In advance, Thank you.>>CORRECT!Good night >>CORRECT!