Hi, Joan

Hello I'm [이름][이름]. Actually,I catch the cold yesterday because Korea weather is so cold. So My voice is not good and difficult to say exactly. I am going to hospital to cure a cold. Next week, I listen to your class very hard if recovery Thank you, you are worried about my cold. Have a nice weekend. Bye

Hi [이름][이름]^^ Oh, you wrote something for me, am happy for this effort co[이름]g from you. I really hope you\'ll be fine soon. I know that you\'re very eager to learn. Keep it up. If you bring that attitude in class we\'ll get to work things out well together^^ see you soon in class again. Be well! Study the following corrections I\'ve made for you. T\' Joan   Hello >>Hello! OR>>Hello. (add punctuation)I\'m [이름][이름]. >>CORRECT! ****In letters we do not usually introduce ourselves in the body of the letter but rather on the last part. Like that of my letter aboveActually,I catch the cold yesterday because Korea weather is so cold.So My voice is not good and difficult to say exactly. >>Actually,I caught colds yesterday because Korea\'s weather is so cold so my voice is not good and it\'s difficult for me to say the words exactly.I am going to hospital to cure a cold. >>I am going to the hospital to cure my colds.Next week, I listen to your class very hard if recovery >>Next week, I will listen in our class attentively if I recover.Thank you, you are worried about my cold. >>Thank you for worrying about me having colds.Have a nice weekend. >>CORRECT! Bye >>Bye! OR >>Bye.