Hi, Joanna
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm sorry, Joanna. I was sleeping and didn't know you called me. I slept late last night. And it was my mom. She said you talked to her "Hello, mom!" She was wondering who you are. And she thought it may be a scam. Ha Ha ^-^
Now I'm going to go to school. I can connect the internet in the subway! I hope you could have a nice day! Bye
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I am sorry that your Mom thought it was a scam.^^ I think you studied a lot that's why you weren't able to sleep early. Enjoy your day in school!
See you tomorrow!
Joanna
I'm sorry, Joanna. >>Correct
I was sleeping and didn't know you called me.
>>Correct
I slept late last night.
>>Correct
And it was my mom.
>>Correct
She said you talked to her "Hello, mom!"
>>She told me you said "Hello, mom!"
She was wondering who you are.
>>Correct
And she thought it may be a scam. Ha Ha ^-^
>>And she thought it might be a scam. Ha Ha ^-^
Now I'm going to go to school.
Now I'm going to go to school.
>>Correct
I can connect the internet in the subway!
>>Correct
I hope you could have a nice day! Bye
>>Correct
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