hi Joanna!
학생이 쓴 원문
good mornning.
yesterday, i met my maternal grand parents because they came to jeju for tour.
after my night class at 9:00, i went to go to hotel they stay.
i really nice to meet them.
and my grand parents huged me.
i really thanks to them to visit jeju.
when i leaved hotel, my eyes filled with tears.
i wanted to sleep with them, but i couldn't. because i have to go to school early today.
seeyou:)
강사 첨삭
Oh, [이름] darling,
Take a little time to wait for the time you finish college.
Days are so fast and after graduation, you can spend more time with your maternal grandparents. I know how it feels when you miss your loved ones so much. You can’t really help but shed tears especially when they are very dear to you. Have more patience, dear. You will have time for them soon.
Loving you always,
-Teacher Joanna-
good mornning.
>>Good morning!
yesterday, i met my maternal grand parents because they came to jeju for tour.
>>Yesterday, I met my maternal grandparents because they came to Jeju for a tour.
after my night class at 9:00, i went to go to hotel they stay.
>>After my night class at 9:00, I went to the hotel where they are staying.
i really nice to meet them.
>>It was really nice to meet them.
and my grand parents huged me.
>>My grandparents hugged me.
i really thanks to them to visit jeju.
>>I was really thankful they visited Jeju.
when i leaved hotel, my eyes filled with tears.
>>When I left the hotel, I cried.
i wanted to sleep with them, but i couldn't. because i have to go to school early today.
>>I wanted to sleep with them but I couldn’t because I have to go to school early today.
>>I wanted to stay with them for the night but I couldn’t because I need to go to school early today.
seeyou:)
>>See you! J
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