hi Joanna!

2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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i feel good in this morning. actually, i really tired. so i really had a hard time to wake up. but when i hear your vioce, i feel good. i can wake up early everyday thanks to you. and after your call i can do writing report or studying English. a really appriciate it. have a nice day!

강사 첨삭

I really hope you won’t change, [이름]. I would be very happy to see you climb the ladder of success. A kind and humble person like you deserves happiness. Have a wonderful day! It’s always me, T. Joanna   i feel good in this morning. >>I feel good this morning. actually, i really tired. so i really had a hard time to wake up. >>I was really tired, actually. So I had a hard time waking up. but when i hear your vioce, i feel good. >>But when I heard your voice, I felt good. i can wake up early everyday thanks to you. >>I can now wake up early everyday and thank you for that. and after your call i can do writing report or studying English. >>After talking with you, I can write a composition as a practice in studying English. a really appriciate it. >>I really appreciate it. have a nice day! >>Have a nice day!

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