hi Joanna!
학생이 쓴 원문
i feel good in this morning.
actually, i really tired. so i really had a hard time to wake up.
but when i hear your vioce, i feel good.
i can wake up early everyday thanks to you.
and after your call i can do writing report or studying English.
a really appriciate it.
have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
I really hope you won’t change, [이름].
I would be very happy to see you climb the ladder of success.
A kind and humble person like you deserves happiness.
Have a wonderful day!
It’s always me,
T. Joanna
i feel good in this morning.
>>I feel good this morning.
actually, i really tired. so i really had a hard time to wake up.
>>I was really tired, actually. So I had a hard time waking up.
but when i hear your vioce, i feel good.
>>But when I heard your voice, I felt good.
i can wake up early everyday thanks to you.
>>I can now wake up early everyday and thank you for that.
and after your call i can do writing report or studying English.
>>After talking with you, I can write a composition as a practice in studying English.
a really appriciate it.
>>I really appreciate it.
have a nice day!
>>Have a nice day!
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