hi Joanna!
학생이 쓴 원문
yesterday, i had an appoinment with my hongkong crew.
they are always funny.
we went to pub and karaoke.
i felt dizzy,so i came back home in secret.
in today morning, i founded that i didn't remove makeup which i had.
and i have a contusion on my hand.
i don't know why i had it.
:) have a nice week!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Hey!!! What was on your hand?! Hahaha. Now, I'm curious!
Would you mind telling me?
Anyway, I'm glad you had a good time safe and sound with your acquaintances.
I'll wait for your reply.
Waiting,
Joanna
yesterday, i had an appoinment with my hongkong crew.>>Yesterday, I had an appointment with my friends whom I went with in Hongkong.they are always funny.>>They're been funny as always.we went to pub and karaoke.>>We went to a pub and a karaoke bar.i felt dizzy,so i came back home in secret.>>I felt tipsy so I sneaked home.in today morning, i founded that i didn't remove makeup which i had.>>This morning, I found out I didn't remove my make up.
>>This morning, I realized that I didn't wash off my make up before going to bed last night.and i have a contusion on my hand.>>And there is one thing very confusing about what I saw in my hand.i don't know why i had it.>>I don't know how I had it.:) have a nice week!
>>Have a nice weekend!
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