hi Joanna!

2011-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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yesterday, i had an appoinment with my hongkong crew. they are always funny. we went to pub and karaoke. i felt dizzy,so i came back home in secret. in today morning, i founded that i didn't remove makeup which i had. and i have a contusion on my hand. i don't know why i had it. :) have a nice week!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Hey!!! What was on your hand?! Hahaha. Now, I'm curious! Would you mind telling me? Anyway, I'm glad you had a good time safe and sound with your acquaintances. I'll wait for your reply. Waiting, Joanna yesterday, i had an appoinment with my hongkong crew.>>Yesterday, I had an appointment with my friends whom I went with in Hongkong.they are always funny.>>They're been funny as always.we went to pub and karaoke.>>We went to a pub and a karaoke bar.i felt dizzy,so i came back home in secret.>>I felt tipsy so I sneaked home.in today morning, i founded that i didn't remove makeup which i had.>>This morning, I found out I didn't remove my make up. >>This morning, I realized that I didn't wash off my make up before going to bed last night.and i have a contusion on my hand.>>And there is one thing very confusing about what I saw in my hand.i don't know why i had it.>>I don't know how I had it.:) have a nice week! >>Have a nice weekend!

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