hi joey!

2012-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lesley

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Thank you for helping. About "Parents are the best teachers" In my opinion, parents are the best teachers. The reason is that parents are the best experienced hand. They know that what is the life and how to live. Of course, these are not detail and specific. But i think that the life is not regular plan, that is very complex and hard. For example, student’s saying “you have to live kindly”, parent’s saying “you have to live kindly”, both is not different. There are concern, truth and love in the saying of parents. we have to repect and honor. have a good day^^.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I am sorry I didn\'t understand some of the symbols. But anyway, I just provided some necessary corrections for the enhancement of your sentences. Please study it for improvement. See you! ^^ Teacher Joey   Thank you for helping.>>Correct!About \"Parents are the best teachers\">>About the topic, \"Parents are the best teachers.\"In my opinion, parents are the best teachers. >>Correct! or >>I believe that parents are the best teachers. The reason is that parents are the best experienced hand. >>The reason is that parents has the best experienced hand. or >>It is because parents already had a lot of life\'s experiences.  They know that what is the life and how to live. >>They know what is life and how to live it. Of course, these are not detail and specific. >>Of course these are not detailed and specific. But i think that the life is not regular plan, that is very complex and hard. >>But I think life is not regularly planned because it is complicated and hard.  For example, student's saying 'you have to live kindly', parent's saying 'you have to live kindly', both is not different. >>For example the student should be kind to their parents, same with the parents because both are the same. There are concern, truth and love in the saying of parents. >>Parents says that you should be concern, to tell the truth and to love.we have to repect and honor. >>We should learn to respect and honor. have a good day^^. >>Have a good day!  

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