hi joey!

2012-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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good day joey! Thank you for teaching. I remember your tip and advice in the class. I think that 20 days are long. But now i think that these day were too short. During class i learned a lot your teaching. But something was missing. i am not more active for class. Anyway, thank you for your tip by the end of class. God-bye! I hope see you again. God bless you! Last homework answer. 1. The plane flies above the clouds. Answer: above 2. I helped her going against the wishes of my loved ones. Answer: against, of 3.The profit was shared among the shareholders. Answer: among 4.After lunch, I shall complete the remaining task. Answer: after 5.The land is at war with its neighbor. Answer: with

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Hi there [이름]!Thank you for making the last composition. I admire you for having a perfect score in here. Anyway, thank you for the compliment. I really enjoyed having class with you. You didn\'t only learn from me but I can say that I also learned a lot from you. I\'m so thankful that I had you in my class. I believe in your capability. Even if you weren\'t so much active, I know that you try to remember all the things I thought you. Please use these things to be able to enhance your skills further. Always be confident and enthusiastic. I know that you would do better in English so just be positive always. I\'m pretty sure you can master it because of your perseverance and determination to learn. I just hope I could see you again in my class. I will surelyl miss you! Keep up the good work and have more patience! Keep safe and I\'ll see you again next time! Enjoy your Friday and weekend! ~~~  Teacher Joey ~~~~   good day joey!>> Good day Joey! (Your sentence is correct but be cautious in capitalizing the words)Thank you for teaching. >> Thank you for teaching me.I remember your tip and advice in the class. >> I remember your tips and advices in class. >> I will always remember the tips and advices you gave me in our class.I think that 20 days are long. >> I thought that 20 days of having class with you was quite long. But now i think that these day were too short. >> But now, I think that it\'s just too short.During class i learned a lot your teaching.  >> During our class, I could say that I learned a lot from you. >> I learned a lot from you in our class.But something was missing. i am not more active for class. >> But something was missing with me, I wasn\'t so active in class. >> But I guess I lacked something, that is I wasn\'t so active in our class.Anyway, thank you for your tip by the end of class. >> Anyway, thank you for all the tips you gave me in our last class. >> Anyway, I appreciate the tips and advices you gave me in our last class.God-bye!  >> Goodbye!I hope see you again.  >> I hope to see you again! >> I wish I could see you again in class!God bless you! >> correct   \",)Last homework answer. >> Last Homework\'s Answer:1. The plane flies above the clouds.Answer: above >> correct2. I helped her going against the wishes of my loved ones.Answer: against, of >> correct3.The profit was shared among the shareholders.Answer: among >> correct4.After lunch, I shall complete the remaining task.Answer: after >> correct5.The land is at war with its neighbor.Answer: with >> correct  (AT is also a preposition in this sentence)  

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