hi joey!
학생이 쓴 원문
good day joey!
Thank you for teaching.
I remember your tip and advice in the class.
I think that 20 days are long. But now i think that these day were too short. During class i learned a lot your teaching.
But something was missing. i am not more active for class.
Anyway, thank you for your tip by the end of class.
God-bye!
I hope see you again.
God bless you!
Last homework answer.
1. The plane flies above the clouds.
Answer: above
2. I helped her going against the wishes of my loved ones.
Answer: against, of
3.The profit was shared among the shareholders.
Answer: among
4.After lunch, I shall complete the remaining task.
Answer: after
5.The land is at war with its neighbor.
Answer: with
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!Thank you for making the last composition. I admire you for having a perfect score in here. Anyway, thank you for the compliment. I really enjoyed having class with you. You didn\'t only learn from me but I can say that I also learned a lot from you. I\'m so thankful that I had you in my class. I believe in your capability. Even if you weren\'t so much active, I know that you try to remember all the things I thought you. Please use these things to be able to enhance your skills further. Always be confident and enthusiastic. I know that you would do better in English so just be positive always. I\'m pretty sure you can master it because of your perseverance and determination to learn. I just hope I could see you again in my class. I will surelyl miss you! Keep up the good work and have more patience! Keep safe and I\'ll see you again next time! Enjoy your Friday and weekend!
~~~ Teacher Joey ~~~~
good day joey!>> Good day Joey! (Your sentence is correct but be cautious in capitalizing the words)Thank you for teaching.
>> Thank you for teaching me.I remember your tip and advice in the class.
>> I remember your tips and advices in class.
>> I will always remember the tips and advices you gave me in our class.I think that 20 days are long.
>> I thought that 20 days of having class with you was quite long.
But now i think that these day were too short.
>> But now, I think that it\'s just too short.During class i learned a lot your teaching.
>> During our class, I could say that I learned a lot from you.
>> I learned a lot from you in our class.But something was missing. i am not more active for class.
>> But something was missing with me, I wasn\'t so active in class.
>> But I guess I lacked something, that is I wasn\'t so active in our class.Anyway, thank you for your tip by the end of class.
>> Anyway, thank you for all the tips you gave me in our last class.
>> Anyway, I appreciate the tips and advices you gave me in our last class.God-bye!
>> Goodbye!I hope see you again.
>> I hope to see you again!
>> I wish I could see you again in class!God bless you!
>> correct \",)Last homework answer.
>> Last Homework\'s Answer:1. The plane flies above the clouds.Answer: above
>> correct2. I helped her going against the wishes of my loved ones.Answer: against, of
>> correct3.The profit was shared among the shareholders.Answer: among
>> correct4.After lunch, I shall complete the remaining task.Answer: after
>> correct5.The land is at war with its neighbor.Answer: with
>> correct (AT is also a preposition in this sentence)
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