Hi joey
학생이 쓴 원문
Introduce myself
Let me introduce myself.
My name is [Name] Jong Kang, so call me [이름].
I live in Daejeon. my wife lives in my wife’s mother in Ulsan because she is pregnant, so she needs to care of someone. I don’t care my wife all day. So she stays in ulsan by next Marcy.
In the class I told you “she lives in my grandmother”. It was my mistake. At that time I said “grandmother” in spite of myself.
There are 8 people in my family. But they live separately. We are gathering together special day .
I am going to try to write every day.
Have a good night!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Good Day! Yes, please do write to me whenever you can.
You did very well in expressing what you wanted. However, you also made some mistakes. Check them out.
Introduce myself
>>>An Introduction of Myself.Let me introduce myself.
>>> correctMy name is Tae Jong Kang, so call me [이름].
>>> correctI live in Daejeon. my wife lives in my wife’s mother in Ulsan because she is pregnant, so she needs to care of someone. I don’t
>>> I live in Daejeon. My wife lives with my mother-in 뻦aw in Ulsan because she is pregnant. She needs to be taken cared of.
care my wife all day. So she stays in ulsan by next Marcy.
>>> I can\'t take care of my wife all day, so she is staying in Ulsan until May.In the class I told you “she lives in my grandmother”. It was my mistake. At that time I said “grandmother” in spite of myself.
>>>In the class, I told you that she lives with my grandmother, but it was a mistake. At that time, I said gtandmother in spite of myself.There are 8 people in my family. But they live separately. We are gathering together special day .
>>> There are 8 people in our family but we live separately.We only gather together during special days.I am going to try to write every day.
>>> correctHave a good night!
>>> correct
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