Hi Julie
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] was your weekend?
I spent my weekend in Malaysia to attending a wedding party of a cousin of my boyfriend. It was a very busy weekend to me.
Anyway, I am a little nervous at the moment. You know that I am going to start working tomorrow. I am afraid of facing with new envoronment. Particularly, Communicating with the staffs in new company is one of my concern. So I need to your advice about how can I talk with the staffs in that company first time.
I am looking forward to talking with you at our class.
Thank you. ^_______________________^
강사 첨삭
My dear Kimmy,
My weekend was a blast. I attended a birthday party with my cousin. I think that you too had a great weekend.^^ As for your new work,I know that you be fine. Just relax and be yourself~~ Talk to you later..
Xoxo,
Julie~~
Below are your corrections:
Dear [Name]>>Correct^^How was your weekend?
>>Correct^^I spent my weekend in Malaysia to attending a wedding party of a cousin of my boyfriend.
>>I spent my weekend in Malaysia to attend a wedding party of my boyfriend’s cousin.
It was a very busy weekend to me.>>It was a very busy weekend for me.Anyway, I am a little nervous at the moment.
>>Correct^^
You know that I am going to start working tomorrow.
>>Correct^^
I am afraid of facing with new envoronment.
>>I’m afraid of the new environment I’m going to face.
Particularly, Communicating with the staffs in new company is one of my concern.
>> Particularly, in communicating with the staffs in the new company is one of my concern.
So I need to your advice about how can I talk with the staffs in that company first time.
>> So I need to your advice about how can I talk with the staffs in that company for the first time. I am looking forward to talking with you at our class.>>I am looking forward to talking to you at our class.Thank you. ^_______________________^
>>Correct^^
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