Hi! June
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! again.. haha..
I had a nice dinner with my colleagues
A nice dinner => Budae jigae ( korean food)
Suddenly I want to know your age ... Reason why is a secret.. haha..
I spend most of the time in the office but think it is not good...
In terms of money ...... It is not easy to decide... haha
Have a nice night..!! teacher....
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ho Chan!
I won’t disclose my age until you tell me the reason you’re suddenly curious.^^
Work on your punctuations when you write, okay?
~June
Hi! again.. haha..
>> Correct
>> Hi again! Haha... (>>Better)
I had a nice dinner with my colleagues
>> Correct
A nice dinner => Budae jigae ( korean food)
>> Our nice dinner was budae jigae (Korean food).
Suddenly I want to know your age ... Reason why is a secret.. haha..
>> Suddenly I want to know your age but the reason is a secret. Haha...
I spend most of the time in the office but think it is not good...
>> Correct
>> I spend most of the time in the office but think it is not good. (>>Better)
In terms of money ...... It is not easy to decide... haha
>> In terms of money, it is not easy to decide... Haha.
Have a nice night..!! teacher....
>> Correct
>> Have a nice night, teacher! (>>Better)
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