Hi! June

2010-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 June

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Hi! again.. haha.. I had a nice dinner with my colleagues A nice dinner => Budae jigae ( korean food) Suddenly I want to know your age ... Reason why is a secret.. haha.. I spend most of the time in the office but think it is not good... In terms of money ...... It is not easy to decide... haha Have a nice night..!! teacher....

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Hello, Ho Chan! I won’t disclose my age until you tell me the reason you’re suddenly curious.^^ Work on your punctuations when you write, okay? ~June   Hi! again.. haha.. >> Correct >> Hi again! Haha... (>>Better) I had a nice dinner with my colleagues >> Correct A nice dinner => Budae jigae ( korean food) >> Our nice dinner was budae jigae (Korean food). Suddenly I want to know your age ... Reason why is a secret.. haha.. >> Suddenly I want to know your age but the reason is a secret. Haha... I spend most of the time in the office but think it is not good... >> Correct >> I spend most of the time in the office but think it is not good. (>>Better) In terms of money ...... It is not easy to decide... haha >> In terms of money, it is not easy to decide... Haha. Have a nice night..!! teacher.... >> Correct >> Have a nice night, teacher! (>>Better)

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