Hi, June~
학생이 쓴 원문
It's a 00:03 am.
I am a little tired. Today I go again a fitness-center.
Oh, My trainer is maybe Devil.Uuuu
I see like the Hell when I do hard practice.
He never take me rest. Maybe I can success in my diet thank to devil trainer. Hahahhaha!
Today I mean that 'Do you kown the statistics about Asian calculation ability? The Asian is the best race about calculation of the wolrd."
yes, I want to say that. kkkk. Could you understend?
Actually I prepare my answer. But that's so difficult that I say something like conversation than write.
l am surprised when you say Krean. 따라하세요. That mean 'speak you fallow me.'kkkk
And tomorrow I have a something special plan!
Can you catch my something? How do you think what is my plan?
Friday I tell you that!
bye >A< Have a good night!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kong Min!
Was the time really 3 minutes after midnight? You said, 00:03 a.m. Why were you still awake?
Did you mean 3 in the morning? If I were in your place, I'd sleep immediately after the workout.
"Devil" is a pretty strong word to use to describe a person but I guess the trainer really gave you a tough time.
However, I encourage you keep a good attitude about your exercise because, as you said, it will help you reach your goal.^^
I understood about the statistics and I truly believe that there are more Asians who are gifted in Math. We are indeed nerds!^^
You made me wonder about the surprise. I can't wait til Friday!
~June
It's a 00:03 am.
>> It's 00:03 a.m.I am a little tired. Today I go again a fitness-center.
>> I am a little tired. Today, I went to the fitness center again.Oh, My trainer is maybe Devil.Uuuu
>> Oh! My trainer is like the devil!I see like the Hell when I do hard practice.
>> It's like I see hell everytime I do rigorous practice.He never take me rest. Maybe I can success in my diet thank to devil trainer. Hahahhaha!
>> He never lets me rest. Maybe I can succeed in my diet, thanks to the evil trainer. Hahahaha!Today I mean that 'Do you kown the statistics about Asian calculation ability? The Asian is the best race about calculation of the wolrd."
>> Today I meant, "Do you know the statistics about the Asian's calculation ability? The Asian race is the best in the world with calculation."
yes, I want to say that. kkkk. Could you understend?
>>That is what I wanted to say. Do you understand?Actually I prepare my answer. But that's so difficult that I say something like conversation than write.
>> Actually, I prepared my answer but it's so difficult to say something in conversation than in writing.l am surprised when you say Krean. 따라하세요. That mean 'speak you fallow me.'kkkk
>> I was surprised when you spoke Korean '따라하세요.'. That means "follow me". kkkk And tomorrow I have a something special plan!
>> Tomorrow, I have a special plan!Can you catch my something? How do you think what is my plan?
>> Can you guess what that something is? What do you think is my plan?Friday I tell you that!
>> I will tell you on Friday!bye >A< Have a good night!
>> Bye! >A< Have a good night!
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