Hi, June~

2010-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 June

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It's a 00:03 am. I am a little tired. Today I go again a fitness-center. Oh, My trainer is maybe Devil.Uuuu I see like the Hell when I do hard practice. He never take me rest. Maybe I can success in my diet thank to devil trainer. Hahahhaha! Today I mean that 'Do you kown the statistics about Asian calculation ability? The Asian is the best race about calculation of the wolrd." yes, I want to say that. kkkk. Could you understend? Actually I prepare my answer. But that's so difficult that I say something like conversation than write. l am surprised when you say Krean. 따라하세요. That mean 'speak you fallow me.'kkkk And tomorrow I have a something special plan! Can you catch my something? How do you think what is my plan? Friday I tell you that! bye >A< Have a good night!

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Hi, Kong Min! Was the time really 3 minutes after midnight? You said, 00:03 a.m. Why were you still awake? Did you mean 3 in the morning? If I were in your place, I'd sleep immediately after the workout. "Devil" is a pretty strong word to use to describe a person but I guess the trainer really gave you a tough time. However, I encourage you keep a good attitude about your exercise because, as you said, it will help you reach your goal.^^ I understood about the statistics and I truly believe that there are more Asians who are gifted in Math. We are indeed nerds!^^ You made me wonder about the surprise. I can't wait til Friday! ~June   It's a 00:03 am. >> It's 00:03 a.m.I am a little tired. Today I go again a fitness-center. >> I am a little tired. Today, I went to the fitness center again.Oh, My trainer is maybe Devil.Uuuu  >> Oh! My trainer is like the devil!I see like the Hell when I do hard practice.  >> It's like I see hell everytime I do rigorous practice.He never take me rest. Maybe I can success in my diet thank to devil trainer. Hahahhaha!  >> He never lets me rest. Maybe I can succeed in my diet, thanks to the evil trainer. Hahahaha!Today I mean that 'Do you kown the statistics about Asian calculation ability? The Asian is the best race about calculation of the wolrd."  >> Today I meant, "Do you know the statistics about the Asian's calculation ability? The Asian race is the best in the world with calculation." yes, I want to say that. kkkk. Could you understend?  >>That is what I wanted to say. Do you understand?Actually I prepare my answer. But that's so difficult that I say something like conversation than write.  >> Actually, I prepared my answer but it's so difficult to say something in conversation than in writing.l am surprised when you say Krean. 따라하세요. That mean 'speak you fallow me.'kkkk  >> I was surprised when you spoke Korean '따라하세요.'. That means "follow me". kkkk                  And tomorrow I have a something special plan!  >> Tomorrow, I have a special plan!Can you catch my something? How do you think what is my plan?  >> Can you guess what that something is? What do you think is my plan?Friday I tell you that! >> I will tell you on Friday!bye >A< Have a good night! >> Bye! >A< Have a good night!

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