Hi, June ~
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, you are right! I trust you. To honesy speaking I was disapointed. However after talked with you, I think that The new book can help me and make me better. I trust you and your recommend. Hahahaha >A<
Are yor going which city? And Why?
I will go militery tomorrow because I want to test my temper.
I make a stronge temper in militery. run run run go on run.kkk
I have a private lesson today. HA =33 I am a little tired.
It's heavy weather! After calling, it started rain, lightning and thunder. When I came back home, I had an umbrella, bag and 3 book in my hand. OH GOD! It was so horrible. I am really painful ~~
I hope that you have a good time tomorrow with a laugh.
Bye, June ~
강사 첨삭
Hey, Kong Min!
Thank you for trusting me. Xoxox
~June
Yes, you are right! I trust you.
>> Correct
To honesy speaking I was disapointed.
>> To be honest, I was disappointed.
>> OR: Honestly speaking, I was disappointed.
However after talked with you, I think that The new book can help me and make me better.
>> However, after talking to you, I think that the new book can help me speak better.
I trust you and your recommend. Hahahaha >A<
>> I trust you and your recommendation. Hahahaha >A<
Are yor going which city? And Why?
>> Which city are you going to? And why?
I will go militery tomorrow because I want to test my temper.
>> I will go to the military training tomorrow because I want to test my temper.
I make a stronge temper in militery. run run run go on run.kkk
>> I will show a strong character in the military. Run, run, run, go on, run.kkk
I have a private lesson today. HA =33 I am a little tired.
>> Correct
It's heavy weather!
>> It's bad weather!
After calling, it started rain, lightning and thunder.
>> After your call, there was rain, lightning and thunder.
When I came back home, I had an umbrella, bag and 3 book in my hand.
>> When I came back home, I had an umbrella, a bag and 3 books in my hand.
OH GOD! It was so horrible.
>> Correct
I am really painful ~~
>> I am really in pain. ~~
I hope that you have a good time tomorrow with a laugh.
>> I hope that you have a good laugh tomorrow.
Bye, June ~
>> Correct
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