Hi, June ~

2010-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 June

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, you are right! I trust you. To honesy speaking I was disapointed. However after talked with you, I think that The new book can help me and make me better. I trust you and your recommend. Hahahaha >A< Are yor going which city? And Why? I will go militery tomorrow because I want to test my temper. I make a stronge temper in militery. run run run go on run.kkk I have a private lesson today. HA =33 I am a little tired. It's heavy weather! After calling, it started rain, lightning and thunder. When I came back home, I had an umbrella, bag and 3 book in my hand. OH GOD! It was so horrible. I am really painful ~~ I hope that you have a good time tomorrow with a laugh. Bye, June ~

강사 첨삭

Hey, Kong Min! Thank you for trusting me. Xoxox ~June Yes, you are right! I trust you. >> Correct To honesy speaking I was disapointed. >> To be honest, I was disappointed. >> OR: Honestly speaking, I was disappointed. However after talked with you, I think that The new book can help me and make me better. >> However, after talking to you, I think that the new book can help me speak better. I trust you and your recommend. Hahahaha >A< >> I trust you and your recommendation. Hahahaha >A< Are yor going which city? And Why? >> Which city are you going to? And why? I will go militery tomorrow because I want to test my temper. >> I will go to the military training tomorrow because I want to test my temper. I make a stronge temper in militery. run run run go on run.kkk >> I will show a strong character in the military. Run, run, run, go on, run.kkk I have a private lesson today. HA =33 I am a little tired. >> Correct It's heavy weather! >> It's bad weather! After calling, it started rain, lightning and thunder. >> After your call, there was rain, lightning and thunder. When I came back home, I had an umbrella, bag and 3 book in my hand. >> When I came back home, I had an umbrella, a bag and 3 books in my hand. OH GOD! It was so horrible. >> Correct I am really painful ~~ >> I am really in pain. ~~ I hope that you have a good time tomorrow with a laugh. >> I hope that you have a good laugh tomorrow. Bye, June ~ >> Correct

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