Hi karla:D
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I had a great time talking to you! I think I have the interests of a highschool girl! haha! Because we have so much in common. Well,your composition is very good. I think you are not a typical teenager. You are special! Anyway, these are my corrections:
Karla
Hi again!
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we spent whole of our time talking about amercian singers or shows.
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It was not bad,was good!
>>It was not bad, it was good!
sometimes It'd be better than spending time talking about educational book!
>>Sometimes it'd be better than spending time talking about an educational book!
because you know it's funny!
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I could have spoken in british accent,but I didn't.
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because I couldn't remember some kind of sentences which are fit in british accent.
>>Because I couldn't remember some kind of sentence which fits the british accent.
but I'll prepare for you on Monday!
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I'll read the script of 'SKINS',because It's on my computer!
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By the way,You seem to have similar styles in choosing shows or songs.
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That's why I like you!
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I hope that you'll hear 'New Divide' sang by Linkin Park,and I also recommend 'It's all about you' sang by Mcfly I said a while ago.
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(You may know this song,for it's too popular!)
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See you on Monday!
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