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Example sentence: We felt as if half the people in town were poking their noses into our lives.
My thoughts are as follows in the foregoing sentence. As even the advice seriously enough, to be interference. Such excessive interference is in fact tired. Because of that, villagers and maintaining good relationships we don't like it at all costs be polite to cases that will need to raise an objection. The villagers in the course of relations between the two countries to get worse during a period of time, we will have distance time.
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Example sentence: We felt as if half the people in town were poking their noses into our lives.
>> Correct.My thoughts are as follows in the foregoing sentence.
>> Correct.
As even the advice seriously enough, to be interference.
>> As the advice is serious enough to interefere.
Such excessive interference is in fact tired.
>> Such excessive interference is in fact tiring.
Because of that, villagers and maintaining good relationships we don\'t like it at all costs be polite to cases that will need to raise an objection.
>> Did you mean: Because of that, villagers maintained good relationships to one another. We should be polite at all times to avoid raising an objection.
The villagers in the course of relations between the two countries to get worse during a period of time, we will have distance time.
>> Did you mean: The villagers and the relationship between the two countires get worse during a period of time.
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