Hi klein~~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for your comment and advice.
I would feel better after read your comment.
Thank you. I will cheering myself.^^
homework~~
Yes, There is a women among i have remembered people.
She was a professor of my university. She was amissionally.
She taught some music subject for student.
And she also had a choir name of "Ensemble", i was member of choir.
She had the most resplendent personality because she was faithful and warm.
Every student respected her. And me too.
She was a person have the most resplendent personality in my remember.
ps : I am sorry Klein, I May not have our class tomorrow.
Because i may go to the work at the field early morning.
I'm sorry.
강사 첨삭
A billowing Thursday to you, Kirk!
You are so considerate, and not to mention, so sweet.
I can say that you have a resplendent personality.
That professor of yours must have been so proud of you when you were still part of the choir.
The name of your choir is very telling. In an ensemble, amidst the differences of every single piece or part, they all work together, like in harmony.
Do you still keep in touch with her? I hope you do!
By the way, how are you doing?
Don\'t stress yourself by working too hard, Kirk.
You should take a break once in a while. You need to catch your breath!
Always keep yourself warm and cool at the same time.
And I will mark your words, Kirk!
You said that you\'ll be cheering yourself up from now on, so always cheer up.
Just put a smile on your face and let\'s hope that it\'ll be contagious enough to brighten up the day of those people around you.
Catch you tomorrow, Kirk!
_Klein
Thank you for your comment and advice.>>Correct!I would feel better after read your comment.>>I would feel better after reading your comment. [possibility]
>>I felt better after I read your comment. [already happened]
>>I felt better after reading your comment.Thank you.
[Likewise, Kirk! Your kind words made me feel much better.]
I will cheering myself.^^>>I will be cheering myself up.
>>I will cheer myself up.
>>I will always cheer myself up.homework~~>>Correct
OR >> Here\'s my homework:Yes, There is a women among i have remembered people.>>Yes, there is this woman that I remember among all of the people that I know.
>>Yes, I remember a distinct woman among all the people that I know.She was a professor of my university.
>>She is a professor in my university. [still working in that university]
>>She was a professor in my university. [done with her term]
She was amissionally.>>She was a missionary. [past]
>>She is a missionary. [up to this day]She taught some music subject for student.>>She taught some music subjects to the students.
>>She taught some music courses to the students.And she also had a choir name of \"Ensemble\", i was member of choir.>>And she also had a choir whose name is \"ENSEMBLE\". I was once a member of that choir.She had the most resplendent personality because she was faithful and warm.>>Correct
OR >> For me, she has the most resplendent personality because she is so faithful and warm. [up to this day]Every student respected her. And me too.>>Correct
OR >> Every student, including me, respected her.
>> Every student respected her. And as for me, I respected her and still respect her up to this day.She was a person have the most resplendent personality in my remember.>>She was the person who has the most resplendent personality in my mind.
>>As far as I can remember, she has the most resplendent personality.ps : I am sorry Klein, I May not have our class tomorrow.>>Correct
OR >> P.S. I am sorry Klein. I may not take the class tomorrow.Because i may go to the work at the field early morning.>>This is because I may go to the workfield early in the morning.
>>This is because I may go to the field for work early in the morning.I\'m sorry.
[Kirk, you don\'t need to apologize. I do understand that it can\'t be helped. Just keep safe!]
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