Hi Klein~~!!^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Another cool morning to you, Kirk!
This is great! You are no longer busy, unlike last week.
A proof to this is your composition.
You finally found some time to drop by our composition board. Thank you so much, Kirk!
You know very well that I\'ve never been to Korea, so I ought to thank you for giving me some updates on what\'s happening now in your country, be it about the weather, the season and the like.
And to answer your question, I have to say that the weather here in our place, Baguio City, is fine.
It feels like Christmas is in the air because the breeze is so cool.
I like it when it\'s not all too sunny because the scorching heat can be unbearable.
And just like you, I put my foot down on something that I\'ve thought not just once but twice or more.
I will catch you later, Kirk, and maybe, we can still talk about the matters that you opened up here, if you like.
Let\'s greet our day with a smile!
_Klein
How are you today?
>>Correct!
Today wether here in Korea is nice.
>>Today\'s weather here in Korea is nice.
>> The weather in Korea today is nice.
>>The weather is nice here in Korea at this time of the year.
Night and morning times are a little cold however day time is cool.
>>It is a little cold early in the morning and at night. However, during the day time, when the sun is at its peak, it is cool.
>>It is a bit cold early in the morning and during the night but at day time, it is cool.
Korea little by little becaming winter.
>>Here in Korea, winter is coming, little by little.
>>We are nearly experiencing winter here in Korea.
How wether is in Philippin?
>>How is the weather in the Philippines?
>>How is the weather there in the Philippines?
>>How is the weather in your country?
Homework~
>>Correct
OR >> Here is my homework:
I put my foot down when i decide something.
>> I put my foot down when I have to decide on something.
>> I put my foot down whenever I decide on something.
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