Hi Klein^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How is your feel today?
I had a good day today.
And thank you for giving me your poem.
I don't understand yours absolutlly but I felt that is so nice.
Thank you for your concern with our class every day.
You are good teacher and good friend to me.
Thank you Klein.
At last, I am praying now for your people and i will must do this everyday.
Good night. My dear friend^^
From Kirk.
P.S
About home work, I do not understand perfactly your question.
I'm sorry. I may need to your explain more.
강사 첨삭
This is to my friend, Kirk:
Greetings to you my new-found friend!
I\'m so glad that you don\'t simply treat me as your teacher but more importantly, as a good friend.
I will definitely live up to what these words [GOOD FRIEND] embody.
I also enjoyed my time yesterday with one of my college friends.
It was her birthday last November 8, but it\'s only that day that we both found some time to go out.
Actually, we were also about to meet our friend from Bicol, but I got off from work a bit late.
Nonetheless, my friend, whose name is Jasmine, shared a lot of unexpected stories with me.
She\'s so updated with what\'s happening to all our friends compared to me.
It was like a thorn taken out from my heart when I heard straight from her that our friends who lives in Bacolod is fine, together with her family.
They were not gravely affected by the typhoon, so I\'m really happy.
Kirk, I ought to thank you for including us in your prayers. You are such a nice person!
I\'m so blessed I met you!
I think everyone around you is grateful to have you.
And Kirk, regarding the question that I posted as your homework, I am more than willing to explain it to you.
The question was: \"What is your cup of tea other than what you have already shared to me, so far?\"
Cup of tea means something one enjoys or one\'s special interest.
Like for example, my cup of tea is paper cutting because I love doing it.
I don\'t know you that much but based on some of your stories, I think that singing is your cup of tea.
Let us not forget about swimming! I think it is also your cup of tea.
And so, other than these, what else is your cup of tea, Kirk?
It has to be something that you haven\'t told me yet, so I can get to know you more.
For the other homework, which is this: \"Relate to me a story where your hands were tied, so your friend who was in dire need of your help got mad at you;\" for example, one of your friends needs your help but since you are busy, you can\'t go to your friend and console him/her. Have you been put in this kind of situation before, Kirk? If yes, I want you to share this story to me in as much detail as you can.
I hope I was able to give light to these ones, Kirk.
If you have some other questions, feel free to raise them in class, OK?
May you continue to have a great day Kirk!
Always wishing you well,
_Klein
How is your feel today?>>How is your feeling today?
>>How do you feel today?
>>How are you doing today?I had a good day today.>>Correct
OR >> I just had a good day.And thank you for giving me your poem.>>Correct
OR >> And thank you for sharing a poem with me.I don\'t understand yours absolutlly but I felt that is so nice.>>I didn\'t completely understand it but I felt like it is so nice.Thank you for your concern with our class every day.>>Correct
OR >> Thank you for your concern about our classes.You are good teacher and good friend to me.>>You are a good teacher and friend to me.Thank you Klein.>>CorrectAt last, I am praying now for your people and i will must do this everyday.>>At last, I am praying for your people now and I will do this everyday.
>>At last, I am praying for your people now, which I must do everyday.Good night. My dear friend^^>>Correct
OR >> Good night, my dear friend.From Kirk.>>CorrectP.SAbout home work, I do not understand perfactly your question.>>About the homework, I did not understand the question perfectly.I\'m sorry. I may need to your explain more.
>>I\'m sorry but I may need you to explain it a little further.
>>I\'m afraid I need to ask you to explain it a little further.
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