Hi Klein.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no see, Klein.^^
How are you^^ (I wrote this sentence at november 22.)
Do you have good time in these days?
Thesedays i have had busy days in my working place Ulsan.
(Ulsan is a bic city in the Korea.)
Talking about our staffs everyday planing on there...
Everydays we woke up at 6am.
And we had must arrived to construction site at 6:30 and have a breakfast.
And after eating meal, we started working and it is not finshed until 6pm.
Sometimes, We have worked overtime until 8 to 10pm.
We were worked hardly everydays.
Hardest on everything is standing the cold temperature.
Because, I experienced working on winter for the first time.
So i was harder than other times.
I would weared many clothes on this place, but i didn't defend my body from the coldness.T.T
However, It is good news that I am healthful now.^^
I am thankful your encouragement in everyday morning.^^
Thank you Klein^^
Have a nice day~~
from Kirk.
강사 첨삭
A cool morning to you, Kirk!
You did work hard for the past days but I\'m pretty sure that your hardwork will soon pay off. Believe me!
This can also be translated to our English classes.
Just do your very best in everything you do and the fruits will definitely be beyond your expectations.
And Kirk, do keep yourself warm.
Well, I still need to go over your answers to the questions that I posted as your homework, so catch you in the next composition board!
_Klein
Long time no see, Klein.^^>>Correct!How are you^^
>>Correct
OR >> How are you?
(I wrote this sentence at november 22.)>>I wrote this sentence on November 22.
>>I wrote this sentence last November 22.Do you have good time in these days?>>Have you had good times these days?Thesedays i have had busy days in my working place Ulsan. (Ulsan is a bic city in the Korea.)>>I have had busy days at work in Ulsan, which is a big city in Korea.
>>I have been busy lately because of work. I\'ve been staying in Ulsan, which is a big city in Korea.
>>I have been busy at my workplace in Ulsan, which happened to be a big city in Korea.Talking about our staffs everyday planing on there...>>I talked with the staff almost every single day for our plans.Everydays we woke up at 6am.>>Every day, we woke up at 6 AM.
>>We dragged ourselves out of bed every single day at six in the morning.And we had must arrived to construction site at 6:30 and have a breakfast.>>We all had to arrive at the construction site at 6:30 for breakfast.And after eating meal, we started working and it is not finshed until 6pm.>>After eating our meal together, we started working, even over 6 PM.Sometimes, We have worked overtime until 8 to 10pm.>>For some time, we worked overtime until 8 to 10 PM.We were worked hardly everydays.>>We worked hard for the past days.
>>We got served harshly for the past days.Hardest on everything is standing the cold temperature.>>The hardest challenge is withstanding that of the coldness.
>>The hardest hurdle is withstanding that of the low temperature.Because, I experienced working on winter for the first time.>>This is the first time I worked in winter.So i was harder than other times.>>It was harder for me than in other times.I would weared many clothes on this place, but i didn\'t defend my body from the coldness.T.T>>I wore thick clothes but these didn\'t do the trick. It didn\'t defend my body from the coldness.
>>I wore thick clothes but these didn\'t keep me warm. The coldness penetrated through them.However, It is good news that I am healthful now.^^>>However, I am healthy now, so this is the good news!I am thankful your encouragement in everyday morning.^^>>I am thankful for your encouragement every morning.Thank you Klein^^>>CorrectHave a nice day~~>>Correctfrom Kirk.
>>Correct
OR >> From: Kirk
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