HI^^ Klein
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there^^
I'm sorry what i didn't anser your phone the time.
I was working the time. So, the around is very noisy.
I checked your calling after 11am.
I am sorry..^^
강사 첨삭
Kirk, don\'t be absent again, OK?
You are my friend, so I don\'t want you to be too hard on yourself.
It can\'t be helped when you truly are preoccupied with work.
Just take things easy, Kirk.
Thank you so much for being so nice to me.
_Klein
Hi there^^>>CorrectI\'m sorry what i didn\'t anser your phone the time.>>I\'m sorry for not answering your phone calls at that time.I was working the time. So, the around is very noisy.>>I was working then, so it was noisy at the site.I checked your calling after 11am.>>I checked my phone after 11a.m.I am sorry..^^
[Apology accepted!]
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