Hi Klein~

2013-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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This day is good for me. How were you to spend for today. Did you same to me? Please I wish to you who have a good day.^^ Today, I went to cinema with my friend when i met in elementary school for whaching a movie. When i went to cinema is early eveing. And the movie's name is "escape plan". Characters are "Arnold Schwarzenegger" and "Sylvester Stallone". But it was not enjoyable. In fact, I was disappointed this movie.^^;; Anyway, this day is good for me^^ *home work Who's the most urbane among your friends? Why do you say so? Those are two men who i know that urbane in my friends. They are have hendsome face and good stile sense. So, their have been many popularity from many women.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kirk! Are you studying right now? I presume you already listened to the recording of our class a while back. I also listened to it. My voice can really be annoying. It is high-pitched! How do you think can I tone it down? Nonetheless, I just hope that you were able to take note of the modifications that I provided in class and in the feedback. By the way, the title of the movie that I mentioned earlier is, \"The Last Stand\". And Kirk, I want to know more about two of your friends, who you think are urbane. I think you are urbane, too, aren\'t you? Have a good rest later, Kirk! _Klein This day is good for me.>>CorrectHow were you to spend for today. Did you same to me?>>How did you you wpend your day? Was it the same with me?Please I wish to you who have a good day.^^>>Please, I wish you would have a good day. >>I am wishing you a good day!Today, I went to cinema with my friend when i met in elementary school for whaching a movie.>>Today, I went to the cinema with my friend, who I met in elementary school, to watch a movie. >>Today, I met my elementary school friend are we saw a movie.When i went to cinema is early eveing.>>When I went to the cinema it was early in the evening.And the movie\'s name is \"escape plan\".>>The movie\'s title is \"Escape Plan\". >>The title of the movie is \"Escape Plan\".Characters are \"Arnold Schwarzenegger\" and \"Sylvester Stallone\".>>The main characters are Arnold Schwarzenegger and Sylvester Stallone.But it was not enjoyable.>>Correct OR >> But I did not find it enjoyable. >>But I did not enjoy the movie.In fact, I was disappointed this movie.^^;;>>In fact, I was disappointed with this movie.Anyway, this day is good for me^^>>Correct*home work >>homeworkWho\'s the most urbane among your friends? Why do you say so?Those are two men who i know that urbane in my friends.>>Two among my friends are urbane. >>I think, two of my friends are urbane. >>Two of my men friends are urbane.They are have hendsome face and good stile sense.>>They have a handsome face and a good sense of style.So, their have been many popularity from many women. >>So they have been so popular among women.

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