Hi Klein^^

2014-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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This day is so nice for me. Enven though, The temperature was low, today did not have dirty wind from the China be called of "Whang Sa". So outside wind was so cool. Therefore my feeling is so good better than other days. I want to you got feel like mine on this day.^^ From Kirk. -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- What words of encouragement can you give to someone who is in no bed of roses? Generally, I have done speaking of encouragement words for the other people as follows "cheer up, every all right!" I remember that all most times i said this word for the other people. Cheer up!! Klein^^

강사 첨삭

Kirk, I just want to clarify something. Is \"whang sa\" the yellow dust from China? I\'m not quite sure but I overheard it somewhere. You may answer my question in class. And Kirk, it\'s really good to hear that you\'ve been feeling much better these days than in the past few days. Do take good care of your health! [not ot mention, your VOICE] Don\'t eat too much after 6, OK? Take in lots of fluid, too. And Kirk, thanks for your words of encouragement. I sure will cheer myself up! By the way, are you having a smooth-sailing afternoon? Well, just refrain from having that long face. Always smile! _Klein This day is so nice for me.>>Correct OR >> For me, this day is so nice.Enven though, The temperature was low, today did not have dirty wind from the China be called of \"Whang Sa\".>>Even though the temperature was low, today, we didn\'t have the dirty wind from China, which we call \"whang sa\". >>Even though the temperature was low, today, we didn\'t have the yellow dust from China, which we call \"whang sa\".So outside wind was so cool.>>So the wind outside was so cool. >>So the breeze was so cool.Therefore my feeling is so good better than other days.>>Therefore, my feeling is better than the other days. >>Therefore, I feel better than the past few days.I want to you got feel like mine on this day.^^>>I want you to feel the same that I do on this day. >>I want you to feel the same today.From Kirk.>>Correct!-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-What words of encouragement can you give to someone who is in no bed of roses?Generally, I have done speaking of encouragement words for the other people as follows \"cheer up, every all right!\">>Generally speaking, I have expressed words of encouragement for other people as follows: I remember that all most times i said this word for the other people.>>I can remember that most of the time, I say these words to other people.Cheer up!! Klein^^ >>Correct OR >> Cheer up, Klein!

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