Hi Klein^^

2014-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How did you felt this weekend? I had been going to be busy a little this weekend, because of my church job. I had a working that make a choral note book. So, I spended my time for that on this weekend. It was hard to me, Because, To make a choral note book what people can read easy is not easy. So, I spent on it of my all weekend.T,T But, it is funny. Because, I like this job.^^ I want you what will you have a job that you like, too me.^^ Have a good night^^ From Kirk^^ P.S I checked your nation's favorite food. But, I don't know nothing.^^;; I know just a Filipino dishe, name is Balut. I saw this food when i visited your country. But, I didn't try it.^^;; (I do not write down for that reason.^^;;Because, I think what you konw this reason.) -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- 1. I don't eat much meat. 2. Have you travelled to many countries? 3. We don't go to many films. 4. Was there much traffic on the road? 5. Not many tourists visit our town.

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Good afternoon, Kirk! Thank you so much for studying the difference in usage of \"much\" and \"many\". Two thumbs up for the perfect score that you earned here! Also, thank you for finding some time to research on the Filipino dishes that I shared with you last time. Well, not really shared as in the food itself but only their names. You know what, many foreigners find \"balut\" disgusting, but it is a bit delicious and nutritious. When you go here in the Philippines, make sure to have a taste of it, like what you said earlier. I hope you\'ll like it! How about there in Korea, Kirk? What kind of dish would you like to let others have to make their trip complete? You may answer my question in the next composition that you are going to make, Kirk. Until then! Keep safe, Kirk! _Klein How did you felt this weekend?>>How did you feel this weekend?I had been going to be busy a little this weekend, because of my church job.>>I had been a little busy last weekend because of my job in church. >>I am going to be a little busy this weekend because of my chores in church.I had a working that make a choral note book.>>I was tasked to make a choral notebook. >>I was assigned to make a choral notebook.So, I spended my time for that on this weekend.>>So I spent my time for that last weekend. >>So I spent my weekend for that.It was hard to me, Because, To make a choral note book what people can read easy is not easy.>>It was hard for me because making a choral notebook easy for people to read is not easy. >>It is hard to make a simple choral notebook for people to easily understand.So, I spent on it of my all weekend.T,T>>So I spent all my weekend working on it.But, it is funny. Because, I like this job.^^>>But it is fun because I like this job. >>But it is fun because I like my job.I want you what will you have a job that you like, too me.^^>>I want you to have the job that you like, just like me, >>I want you to enjoy your work, just like me.Have a good night^^From Kirk^^>>CorrectP.SI checked your nation\'s favorite food.>>Correct OR >> I checked your favorite food in your nation. >> I checked your favorite local food.But, I don\'t know nothing.^^;;>>But I don\'t know anything about it. >>But I know nothing.I know just a Filipino dishe, name is Balut.>>I just know one Filipino street food, whose name is Balut.I saw this food when i visited your country.>>CorrectBut, I didn\'t try it.^^;; >>Correct(I do not write down for that reason.^^;;Because, I think what you konw this reason.)>>I won\'t write down the reason for that because I think you know my reason.-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-1. I don\'t eat much meat. >>Correct!2. Have you travelled to many countries? >>Correct!3. We don\'t go to many films. >>Correct!4. Was there much traffic on the road? >>Correct!5. Not many tourists visit our town. >>Correct!

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