Hi Klein^^
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Did you had a great day for today?^^
I say "yes".
Because, I went to buffet restaurant with my choral members.^^
Even if, I was reducing my weight, I tried the foods very much.^^
So, i am full now.
Good night Klein.^^
from Kirk.
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
Give me some tips on how I can perk myself up.
I have many way that perk up myself.
First way is to eat chocolate very mush.^^hhh....
(To eat very much when my stress is until removed.)
And second is running when my body until give up for me. hhh...
The last is to sing louder with my voice.
All most stress and down conditions of me are removed by these ways.
If you will try these ways, its might hlep you what way the removing stress.^^
(Perhaps.....^^)
P.S
I remember just onething about The Philippines food.
If i descrbe that food, it is a noodle that spicy a little.
Why i remember that, because it was taste good above all between The Philippines foods.
Do you understand my explanation?
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Oh, Kirk!
I love going to buffet restaurants! This is because I truly love eating.
It\'s good that you are having so much fun with the people that you treasure, Kirk.
And this one is really surprising! You love eating chocolates, don\'t you?
You know why eating chocolates make us feel happy?
Well, better research on that and you\'ll learn more about chocolates.
Honestly, I also love eating chocolates?
Kirk, what\'s your favorite type of chocolate?
Mine would be dark chocolate!
Now I want to have a bar of dark chocolate!
But before I get carried away, Kirk, you remind me of one of my good friends.
Whenever she feels down, she usually asks me to go to a singing room. Good thing these days, she is no longer depressed.
These ways are truly effective to some people. It is very subjective matter in the first place.
Also, regarding the spicy noodles that you\'ve had here in the Philippines, I am not sure of its name but there sure are a lot of spicy noodles here in the Philippines.
Maybe it is a spicy \"pancit\" bihon. The noodle that is used here is transparent and you can mix a lot of vegetables and different types of meat with it.
If not, we also have pancit miki, pancit bato, mami, sotanghon, and many more.
How I hope you\'ll remember its name soon. Maybe I haven\'t tasted it yet, so I better try it as soon as you tell me its name.
Thank you so much Kirk for writing all these down.
Don\'t forget to buy a new notebook for our class.
_Klein
Did you had a great day for today?^^>>Did you have a great day?
>>Did you have a great day today?I say \"yes\".>>Correct
OR >> For me, it is a big \"YES\".Because, I went to buffet restaurant with my choral members.^^>>Correct
OR >> I say, \"YES\" because I went to a buffet restaurant with my choir members.Even if, I was reducing my weight, I tried the foods very much.^^>>Even though I am watching my weight, I tried the food without thinking about it.
>>Even though I am reducing my food intake, I still enjoyed the sumptuous food prepared.So, i am full now.>>CorrectGood night Klein.^^from Kirk.>>Correct-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-Give me some tips on how I can perk myself up.I have many way that perk up myself.>>I have many ways to perk myself up.
>>There are many ways that perk myself up.First way is to eat chocolate very mush.^^hhh....
>>First way is to eat chocolates.
>>First way it to eat bars of chocolate.
>>First way is to eat lots of chocolates.(To eat very much when my stress is until removed.)>>I eat until my stress is relieved.
>>I do stress-eating.And second is running when my body until give up for me. hhh...>>And second is running until I get exhausted.
>>And second is to run until my body gives in to fatigue.The last is to sing louder with my voice.>>The last one is to sing out loud.
>>The last one is to singing on top of my voice.All most stress and down conditions of me are removed by these ways.>>Almost all kinds of stress and depressing situations are relieved and removed through these ways.If you will try these ways, its might hlep you what way the removing stress.^^(Perhaps.....^^)>>If you try one of these ways, it might help you to relieve or completely remove your stress.P.SI remember just onething about The Philippines food.>>I remember just one thing about the Philippine\'s food.
>>I just remember one thing about a Filipino food.If i descrbe that food, it is a noodle that spicy a little.>>If I describe that food, it is a noodle dish that is a little spicy.Why i remember that, because it was taste good above all between The Philippines foods.>>Why I remember that? It\'s because its taste is above all good Filipino dishes.Do you understand my explanation?
>>Correct
OR >> Can you understand my explanation?
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