Hi Klein^^

2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ Of course, i guess your mentions. Good activities for physical and mentally challenging are good for our life. And our class is effective my life. Thank you^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- Essay: What will make you lose your marbles? The best of making me lose my marble was x-girl friend. However, I don't know this leasons...;; She has shaken me until recent.....;; She is nightmare for me!!

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Hello, Kirk! A great morning to both of us! You, sure, never run out of kind words. I\'m grateful that you feel that our class aids in your development in some ways. Now, I\'m even more motivated to work harder! Thank you, Kirk! Your answer to the question just took me by surprise. I\'m so curious about what really happened between you and your previous girlfriend. You must have loved her so much that even at this instant, you still think about her and you feel anger because deep inside, you still care about her and it\'s kind of hard for you to throw your feelings away. I think you should talk with her. This is just a friendly advice, Kirk. I feel like you still have a lot to tell her, so a heart-to-heart talk may ease your pain, just like how you talked to your mother last time about your future. You may be regarding her as a nightmare but come to think of it, way back then, she\'s sort of one of your best dreams, wasn\'t she? So Kirk, I would be more than willing to listen to your story later. Should I say, \"STORIES\" because you will relate to me the story of the hummingbird as well? Also, we need to talk about how we are going to utilize our two textbooks to the fullest. Wow, we got tons of topics to tackle in just a short span of time! But we can do it, can\'t we? I\'ll catch you later, Kirk! _Klein Hi there^^>>Correct!Of course, i guess your mentions.>>Of course, I can guess what you are thinking. >>Of course, I can guess what\'s on your mind.Good activities for physical and mentally challenging are good for our life.>>Good activities as physical and mental challenges are good for our lives or well-being. >>Good physical and mental challenges make us wholesome.And our class is effective my life.>>And our class is effective in my life.Thank you^^[Thanks, Kirk!]HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-Essay: What will make you lose your marbles?The best of making me lose my marble was x-girl friend.>>The best one that may make me lose my marbles is my ex-girlfriend. >>The best person who can make me lose my marbles is my previous girlfriend.However, I don\'t know this leasons...;;>>However, I don\'t know these lessons. >>However, I don\'t know this lesson.She has shaken me until recent.....;;>>She has shaken me until recently.She is nightmare for me!! >>She is a nightmare for me! >>She is a nightmare! >>She has become a nightmare! >>Our relationship has become a nightmare! >>Being with her has become a nightmare!

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