Hi Klein^^

2014-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Long time no see.^^ Do you have had a good resting time for last weekend.^^ I want you to have a great day for today.^^ And i send a Korean pop song to your e-mail. I want you to like this music like me.^^ Of course, this song is made in Korean.^^;; Have a nice day.^^ -homework for today- I don't have some shy feel in the social meeting. Maybe, it is a reason that i don't be shy, i have stood on stages many times.^^ Of course, If i will find a sexy girl, it might be different.....haha..... PS. Lastly, taking about the books of Roman story... The first book's subject is "The birth of Roman". And I will tell you about this book's contents.^^ Good night my Dear.^^

강사 첨삭

How does it feel writing on the board again?

It certainly has been a relatively long time since I last received a message from you.

I can say that I had a good rest last weekend but I did not enjoy it as much as I would have wanted to.

Nonetheless, thanks for wishing me a good day.

A bunch of thanks as well for sharing a Korean pop song with me. I enjoyed listening to it but I know that I would enjoy it much more if you would sing it for me.  I need to learn the song as well, so I can sing along. Again, thank you!

Please share some of your favorite songs.

As for your answer to the homework, you really are sort of playful.

I feel like I can see through you, though I haven\'t met you in person.

And before I forget, since we are going to continue with our practice for the listening tests, perhaps, we can postpone our discussion on your 12 books.

Keep on reading Kirk!

May you continue to have a wonderful day!

_Klein

P.S.

I can\'t seem to forget about your friend who lost his mother; but I know that you are there to look after him as his good friend.

Stay safe Kirk!

Long time no see.^^
>>Correct

Do you have had a good resting time for last weekend.^^
>>Did you have a good resting time last weekend?
I want you to have a great day for today.^^
>>Correct

And i send a Korean pop song to your e-mail.
>>And I sent a Korean pop song to your e-mail.

I want you to like this music like me.^^
>>Correct

OR >> I want you to like this music as much as I do.

Of course, this song is made in Korean.^^;;
>>Correct

OR >> Of course, this song is in Korean.

Have a nice day.^^
>>Correct!

-homework for today-
I don\'t have some shy feel in the social meeting.
>>I don\'t feel shy in social meetings.

Maybe, it is a reason that i don\'t be shy, i have stood on stages many times.^^
>>Maybe the reason that I am not shy is I have stood on stages many t
imes.

Of course, If i will find a sexy girl, it might be different.....haha.....
>>Correct

PS.
Lastly, taking about the books of Roman story...
>>Lastly, let\'s talk about the books of Roman History.

The first book\'s subject is \"The birth of Roman\".
And I will tell you about this book\'s contents.^^
Good night my Dear.^^

>>Correct

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