Hi Klein^^~~Hi there~~!!

2013-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How are you today, Klein?^^ Today was very long and hard a day for me.;; Anyway, I read your message a few minutes ago. (Indeed, I spent long time for comprehending your message.^^;;) And, I agree to your opinion. Korean have very many overtime work. But, almost company don't enough pay for their staff's working. Therefore, Korean workers cann't against by their ownor, because the workers afraid of lost their job. It is another culture of Korea~ Almost employes have same condition. Me too^^ hahaha;;;; home work~ I am cheering myself These day...^^;;;;

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A good afternoon to you, Kirk! I am doing well! Thanks for asking. Weekend is just around the corner, so I hope you can have a good rest then. I\'m glad that you were able to decipher my message last time about Korean work culture. I think I live by it, too, so we are on the same boat, Kirk! I think I should start giving you lecture on TOEIC, what do you think? Of course, TOEIC stands for Test of English for International Communication. The test has four major parts and I bet you are familiar with them, namely: -listening -reading -speaking -writing Time is actually very vital in this kind of English proficiency exam, so you need to be wary of your time at all times. For the listening part, you will certainly describe a photo, so you have to use the inverted pyramid to manage your time wisely. There are short conversations and short talks with question and answer part, so you really need to lend your ears to the examiner. Be very keen, Kirk, because the examiner has his/her own idiolect. For the reading part, comprehension is the tricky part, but I know that you can handle it. I should also warn you on the error recognition part. Be very alert! While as for the speaking and writing parts of this test, it is highly probable that you will describe another picture, a diagram and the like. Just be very spontaneous with your rebuttals, Kirk, and make your response coherent and cohesive. We can work on these specific aspects gradually, Kirk, so do not be overwhelmed. I just want to give you a head\'s up, so you will know what to likely expect from this kind of English proficiency test. Enjoy your weekend, Kirk! _Klein How are you today, Klein?^^>>Correct!Today was very long and hard a day for me.;;>>This day was a very long and hard one for me. >>This is a very long and hard day for me.Anyway, I read your message a few minutes ago. >>Correct!(Indeed, I spent long time for comprehending your message.^^;;)>>Indeed, I spent a long time comprehending your message.And, I agree to your opinion.>>And I agree with your opinion.Korean have very many overtime work.>>Many Koreans always work overtime. >>Koreans usually work overtime.But, almost company don\'t enough pay for their staff\'s working.>>But almost all companies don\'t have enough budget for their staff\'s overtime pay.Therefore, Korean workers cann\'t against by their ownor, because the workers afraid of lost their job.>>Therefore, Korean workers can\'t go against their employer/s because they are afraid to lose their job/s.It is another culture of Korea~>>Correct OR >> It is another part of Korean culture.Almost employes have same condition. Me too^^ hahaha;;;;>>Almost all employees have the same condition, including me. home work~ >>Homework: >>This is my homework. >>Here is my homework: I am cheering myself These day...^^;;;; >>I am cheering myself these days. >>I am cheering myself this day.

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