Hi lei =)

2011-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi lei I'm at my boyfriend home Because I had a problem with internet suddenly (And, my boy friend is talking on the phone with you) Anyway, Here are my additional answers 1) My father is handsome and funny He is 54 years old and he is busy Because He is bussinessman My mother is 52 years old and she is waitress She likes mountain climbing She is short and cute and well dressed My sister is 29 years old She is school teacher Her personality is respectful 2) Actually I don't have a answer anymore......-_ -; (I have no time to prepare our class because I was busy this morning , as I went to a eye hospital) Anyway Thank you so much Have a great day dear

강사 첨삭

Hi Honey!!! I am so proud of you. Because most of your sentences here are correct. But do not forget to put a punctuation mark after each sentence (period(.), question marks(?)). Great job and I had a great time talking to your boyfriend earlier during his level test. Og I hope that he will enroll. See you tomorrow! Lei J   Hi lei >>correct I'm at my boyfriend home >>I’m at my boyfriend’s home. Because I had a problem with internet suddenly>>Because I suddenly had a problem with my internet connection.  (And, my boyfriend is talking on the phone with you)>>correct Anyway,>>correct Here are my additional answers>>correct 1)My father is handsome and funny>>correct He is 54 years old and he is busy>>correct >>He is 54 years old and he is a very busy man. (>>better) Because he is bussinessman.>>correct My mother is 52 years old and she is waitress.>>correct She likes mountain climbing. >>correct She is short and cute and well dressed.>>correct My sister is 29 years old.>>correct She is school teacher>>She is a school teacher. Her personality is respectful.>>correct >>She has a respectful personality. (>>better) 2)Actually I don't have additional answers anymore......-_ -;>>correct  (I have no time to prepare our class because I was busy this morning , as I went to an eye hospital)>>correct Anyway Thank you so much>>correct Have a great day dear. >>correct

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