HI LEI-

2010-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

HI This is [Name]- I told my mom that your congratuation her birthday- she said that'oh- really? please send her my appreciate mind'- anyway- today class was very good- lve never known about wine before our class- l'll try to taste wine what you recommended- I can't remember that name - but i wrote it's name on my text book- anyway- our class going to finish this friday ..ㅠ I'am really sad whenever think about that- I want to restudy with you afther I'll comeback to korea- i am serious- promise- :) Anyway lei- today is monday- i know everyworker don't like monday- they should work wiht waiting next weekend-(i think this is not correct-ㅠ) see you- LEI-~

강사 첨삭

Hi KIM!! I am glad that your mom appreciated the greetings!! Anyways, about your contract, yeah, I feel sad about it too. But you re-enrolling is something to look forward too. By the way, how long will you be gone? Don’t worry, I will never forget you, because I will always remember you whenever I am sleepy. Ha ha^^ Till tomorrow Kim. Lei J   HI This is [Name]->>correct I told my mom that your congratuation her birthday- >>I told my mom that you wanted to greet her for her birthday.she said that'oh- really? please send her my appreciate mind'->>she said “oh, really?!?” please tell her that I really appreciate it. anyway- today class was very good->>anyways, today’s class was very good. lve never known about wine before our class->>I’ve never known about wine before l'll try to taste wine what you recommended->>I’ll try to taste the wine that you recommended I can't remember that name - but i wrote it's name on my text book->>I can’t remember the brand, but i wrote it on my text book- anyway- our class going to finish this friday ..ㅠ>>anyways, our class is going to end this Friday I'am really sad whenever think about that->> I'm really sad whenever I think about it I want to restudy with you afther I'll comeback to korea->>I want to study again with when I come back from my trip i am serious- promise- :)>>correct Anyway lei- today is monday->>correct i know everyworker don't like monday- they should work wiht waiting next weekend-(i think this is not correct-ㅠ) >>I know that working people don’t like Mondays, and they should work until the next weekend see you- LEI-~ >>correct  

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