HI LEI-
학생이 쓴 원문
HI This is [Name]-
I told my mom that your congratuation her birthday-
she said that'oh- really? please send her my appreciate mind'-
anyway- today class was very good-
lve never known about wine before our class-
l'll try to taste wine what you recommended-
I can't remember that name - but i wrote it's name on my text book-
anyway- our class going to finish this friday ..ㅠ
I'am really sad whenever think about that-
I want to restudy with you afther I'll comeback to korea-
i am serious- promise- :)
Anyway lei- today is monday-
i know everyworker don't like monday- they should work wiht waiting next weekend-(i think this is not correct-ㅠ)
see you- LEI-~
강사 첨삭
Hi KIM!!
I am glad that your mom appreciated the greetings!! Anyways, about your contract, yeah, I feel sad about it too. But you re-enrolling is something to look forward too. By the way, how long will you be gone? Don’t worry, I will never forget you, because I will always remember you whenever I am sleepy. Ha ha^^ Till tomorrow Kim.
Lei J
HI This is [Name]->>correct
I told my mom that your congratuation her birthday-
>>I told my mom that you wanted to greet her for her birthday.she said that'oh- really? please send her my appreciate mind'->>she said “oh, really?!?” please tell her that I really appreciate it.
anyway- today class was very good->>anyways, today’s class was very good.
lve never known about wine before our class->>I’ve never known about wine before
l'll try to taste wine what you recommended->>I’ll try to taste the wine that you recommended
I can't remember that name - but i wrote it's name on my text book->>I can’t remember the brand, but i wrote it on my text book-
anyway- our class going to finish this friday ..ㅠ>>anyways, our class is going to end this Friday
I'am really sad whenever think about that->> I'm really sad whenever I think about it
I want to restudy with you afther I'll comeback to korea->>I want to study again with when I come back from my trip
i am serious- promise- :)>>correct
Anyway lei- today is monday->>correct
i know everyworker don't like monday- they should work wiht waiting next weekend-(i think this is not correct-ㅠ)
>>I know that working people don’t like Mondays, and they should work until the next weekend
see you- LEI-~
>>correct
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