Hi! Lei :D

2011-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Teacher I'm [이름] Did you enjoy your lunch? Here are some question 1) My mom has a bit insomnia. So she has a hard time falling asleep at night I think because she has lots of stress and obsession 2) My sister may go to sleep at 1~2am I asked her by call just now kk She study hard English Because she wants emigration from here to Australia So she is lack of sleep these days 3) I mostly like indoor exercises Lei I just checked my schedule and register for this corse Thank you for telling me Have a sweet day =)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! Wow thank you for passing a composition today and for answering the questions. I am really happy that you are my student. You are so patient and sweet. By the way kindly check on the revisions that I made to your sentences. You ca deliver your thoughts properly but be conscious of your subject verb agreement when making sentences okay. Always stay happy and thank you for extending yoru contract!!! Take care!!! Lei J   Hi Teacher I'm [이름] >>correct Did you enjoy your lunch? >>correct Here are some question >>Here are answers to the questions: 1) My mom has a bit insomnia. >>My mom has an insomnia. >>My mom is insomniac. So she has a hard time falling asleep at night >>correct >>So she's having a hard time falling asleep at night. I think because she has lots of stress and obsession >>I think it is because of stress and obsession. 2) My sister may go to sleep at 1~2am >>My sister goes to sleep at around one or two in the morning. I asked her by call just now kk >>I asked her through the phone just now. She study hard English >>She study English so hard. Because she wants emigration from here to Australia >>Because she wants to migrate to Australia. So she is lack of sleep these days >>So she lacks from sleep these days. 3) I mostly like indoor exercises >>I like indoor exercises the most. Lei I just checked my schedule and register for this course >>correct Thank you for telling me >>correct Have a sweet day =) >>correct

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