hi Leny~~!!^^

2013-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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Hi~~ Leny~~!! Thank you for your theach today. However, i got a question for your correction from yesterday. First is "Today morning i couldn't ansering your question, because i didn't know some boca" Is "Today mornig i couldn't ansering your question~" wrong? Otherwise, Is this sentence just do not perfect?? Is this sentence can't used?? And second question. "I don't know my plans for this week because the nature of my job is difficult to have a plan with." Can "something" used to last in this sentence.?? Is "somthing" omited?? And third. "My working is hard to have certain plans. because nobody can not expect to my civil working place to will some happening." -> My work is hard to make plans because nobody do not know what will happens next. Is this right??

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Hello there! Thank you so much for sending me a letter. With your questions, I can see that you are really willing to learn. Bellow are my corrections. I hope that these will help. Teacher Leny~ Hi~~ Leny~~!! Thank you for your theach today. >>Hi~~ Leny~~!! Thank you for teaching me today.However, i got a question for your correction from yesterday.>> However, I have a question about your correction for me from yesterday. First is\"Today morning i couldn\'t ansering your question, because i didn\'t know some boca\">>First is, today morning, I wasn\'t able to answer your question because I didn\'t know what to say. Is \"Today mornig i couldn\'t ansering your question~\" wrong? >> Is \"Today morning I couln\'t answering your question~~\" correct?(The proper way to say that is, \"Today morning, I couldn\'t answer your question.) Otherwise, Is this sentence just do not perfect?? >>Otherwise, is this sentence wrong?Is this sentence can\'t used?? >>Can this sentence be used?And second question. \"I don\'t know my plans for this week because the nature of my job is difficult to have a plan with.\"Can \"something\" used to last in this sentence.??Is \"somthing\" omited?? >> Can we use the word \"something\" to end the sentence, I don\'t know my plans for this week because it is difficult to have a plan due to the nature of my job? And third. \"My working is hard to have certain plans. because nobody can not expect to my civil working place to will some happening.\"-> My work is hard to make plans because nobody do not know what will happens next. Is this right?? >> My third question is whether the sentences, >> \"It is hard to have certain plans because of my work. You cannot expect me to join some outings while I\'m on duty.\" and \"It\'s hard to make some plans because of my job. Nobody knows what will happen next.\"  

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