Hi~ Leny~~!!

2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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How are you taday?? I was very busy. I begin to work place early morning at 6 o'clock. I woke up 5:30. Today's mission was to repair a road-building equiment. (It machine called Finisher to people.) After arive, I prepared to repair it machine. And i worked for assistant to professional. It's very hard work to me because it's so dangerous and working in the sun. In addition, today's sunlight was very hot~~T.T So my skin color changed black from white to my nasi pattern.T.T However as a result, it equipment was repaired perfect. Anyway, it was fruitful. And evening time i went to my mission choir. And i was singing. However, thesedays we wrer singing a hard song it's name of "Te deum". from "Lully". Lully is a composer from France and his choir note is generally difficult. So thesedays our choir have a hard exercise. Anyway today was very good day to me.^^ How are your a day life Leny??

강사 첨삭

Hi Kirk! Good morning! Your composition is a bit long today. At least you did it well and good! ^^ Thank you for your sentences. You asked me how\'s my daily life, right? Well, I always wake up at 3:30AM to prepare to come to work. It is ealry because we have to come to work at 5:00AM Philippine time. Then after work, I pass through the market to buy food then I go home straight. When I\'m home, I would read books, watch movies or sleep. This is my daily routine. ^^ I\'ll see you in class again! T. Leny  How are you today??>>> CorrectI was very busy.>>> CorrectI begin to work place early morning at 6 o\'clock.>>> I begin to work at 6:00 in the morning. >>> OR: I head to work as early as 6:00 in the morning.I woke up 5:30.>>> CorrectToday\'s mission was to repair a road-building equiment. >>> Correct (It machine called Finisher to people.)>>> It is a machine called Finisher. >>> OR: People call the machine Finisher.After arive, I prepared to repair it machine.>>> After I arrive in the site or location, I prepared to repair the machine.And i worked for assistant to professional.>>> And I worked as an assistant to professionals.It\'s very hard work to me because it\'s so dangerous and working in the sun.>>> It\'s very hard for me because it\'s dangerous and we need to work under the sun.In addition, today\'s sunlight was very hot~~T.T>>> In addition, today\'s temperature is very hot.So my skin color changed black from white to my nasi pattern.T.T>>> So my skin tone changed from white to black.However as a result, it equipment was repaired perfect.>>> However, hard work pays because the machine was perfectly repaired.Anyway, it was fruitful.>>> CorrectAnd evening time i went to my mission choir. And i was singing.>>> In the evening, I went to my choir mission. I sang. OR I began singing.However, thesedays we wrer singing a hard song it\'s name of \"Te deum\". from \"Lully\".>>> However, thesedays we are practicing one difficult song entitles \"Te deum\". It is a song from \"Lully\".Lully is a composer from France and his choir note is generally difficult.>>> CORRECTSo thesedays our choir have a hard exercise.>>> CorrectAnyway today was very good day to me.^^>>> CorrectHow are your a day life Leny?? >>> How\'s your daily life, Leny?

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