HI^^ Leny~~

2013-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Hi~ Do you have a good day now? I'm sorry, Becouse I'm late to anser for your letter. In fact, I went to my grandfather's tomb that is far away my house with my parents and uncle's family yesterday. I moved to use my car very long time so i was tired. Yesterday, I slept early at 7:00pm, and i woke up 7:50am today morning. I slept very long time~~haha^^;; Anyway, I didn't go swiming pool yesterday. Maybe, I should be exercise more than usual. Anyway~ today's feel is good, very good. Just I'm not recovered about the flu. By the way, Do you questioned to me about "divorce"? Yes, Korea is allowed this. And very many cuples divorced theirself. This is having incresed more and more, So it is having important problem in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Good afternoon, Kirk! Thank you for giving me another letter. Don\'t worry even though it\'s a little late for me to see this, I still did some correction. I think the reason why you\'re having flu right now is that you were too tired yesterday. Please rest well, okay? I hope that if we will talk tomorrow, you\'re already in good health. Thank you for answering my question by the way.^^ Enjoy the rest of the day! See you! T. Leny Hi~ Do you have a good day now?>>>Hi. Are you having a good day now? *** The sentence pattern here should be present progressive because the day isn\'t over yet.I\'m sorry, Becouse I\'m late to anser for your letter.>>> I\'m sorry because I am late to answer your letter today.In fact, I went to my grandfather\'s tomb that is far away my house with my parents and uncle\'s family yesterday.>>> In fact, I together with my parents and other family members went to my grandfather\'s tomb. The place is faw away from my house.I moved to use my car very long time so i was tired.>>> I was the one who drove the car that\'s why I\'m very tired.Yesterday, I slept early at 7:00pm, and i woke up 7:50am today morning.>>> Last night, I slept at 7:00 PM and woke up at 7:50 this morning. *** If you already used AM, you may no longer use today morning.I slept very long time~~haha^^;;>>> I slept for a long time. ^^ *** Indeed you slept for a long time. :)Anyway, I didn\'t go swiming pool yesterday.>>> Anyway, I didn\'t go to the swimming pool yesterday.Maybe, I should be exercise more than usual.>>> CORRECTAnyway~ today\'s feel is good, very good. >>> Anyway, I feel so good today. >>> OR: I feel very good today. Just I\'m not recovered about the flu.>>> It\'s just that I haven\'t recovered from flu yet.By the way, Do you questioned to me about \"divorce\"?>>> By the way, did you ask me about divorce?Yes, Korea is allowed this.>>> Yes, here in Korea it is allowed.And very many cuples divorced theirself.>>> And many couples get a divorce because of so many reasons.This is having incresed more and more, So it is having important problem in Korea. >>> This problem is increasing every now and then so I think this has become an enormous problem in Korea.

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