hi^^Leny~
학생이 쓴 원문
Today's weather is very good.
Sunshine is brighting to my town.
So, My feel is good today.
But, Finshed vacation make sluggishly me.
Maybe, I would find solutions to my lazy.
How about you?? Did you have good vacation??
hmmmm....... I don't know that you really have vacation.
Anyway, I hope to you were perfact recovered in last weekend.
Please~~^^
Have a good for the rest of the day.
Bye~~
From Kirk.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for your time^^
I appreciated it much.
You are so sweet. Thanks for you concern.
I hope that you will a blast this week.
See you^^
TEACHER LENY
Today\'s weather is very good.>> CorrectSunshine is brighting to my town.>> The sun shone in my town.So, My feel is good today.>> So I feel good today.But, Finshed vacation make sluggishly me.>> But after the vacation it made me sluggish.Maybe, I would find solutions to my lazy.>> Maybe I could find solutions to my laziness.How about you?? Did you have good vacation??>>Correcthmmmm....... I don\'t know that you really have vacation.>>CorrectAnyway, I hope to you were perfact recovered in last weekend.>>Anyway I hope you fully recovered from last week.Please~~^^>> I hope so.Have a good for the rest of the day.>> Have a good time.Bye~~From Kirk.
>>Correct
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