hi^^Leny~

2013-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Today's weather is very good. Sunshine is brighting to my town. So, My feel is good today. But, Finshed vacation make sluggishly me. Maybe, I would find solutions to my lazy. How about you?? Did you have good vacation?? hmmmm....... I don't know that you really have vacation. Anyway, I hope to you were perfact recovered in last weekend. Please~~^^ Have a good for the rest of the day. Bye~~ From Kirk.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for your time^^ I appreciated it much. You are so sweet. Thanks for you concern. I hope that you will a blast this week. See you^^ TEACHER LENY   Today\'s weather is very good.>> CorrectSunshine is brighting to my town.>> The sun shone in my town.So, My feel is good today.>> So I feel good today.But, Finshed vacation make sluggishly me.>> But after the vacation it made me sluggish.Maybe, I would find solutions to my lazy.>> Maybe I could find solutions to my laziness.How about you?? Did you have good vacation??>>Correcthmmmm....... I don\'t know that you really have vacation.>>CorrectAnyway, I hope to you were perfact recovered in last weekend.>>Anyway I hope you fully recovered from last week.Please~~^^>> I hope so.Have a good for the rest of the day.>> Have a good time.Bye~~From Kirk. >>Correct

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