hi Lie-
학생이 쓴 원문
hi- long time no see-
today was so funny-:)
i misunderstood your hairstyle-
i understood that your hairstyle David vaccam(chickin style-)
so when i heard it form you i got shock:)
i tought like that'Lei.. your woman.. i know..it's not easy try to David vaccam's style to the woman..:)
- sorry for misunderstanding your say:)
i searched victoria's lately style- you must be gerouse:)
i am sorry to hear that philiiping's getting hot-...
i can't stand hot weather in the korea..
i heard philiipin's much hotter than korea.. much.. ㅠ
if i can't stand there i'll gonna crazy:)
we have just 2days..ㅜㅜ it's really sad..
anyway- thank you:)
see you-
강사 첨삭
Hi Kim!!
Yeah the weather here is warmer as compared to your country. Anyways, regarding our class, I was actually guessing that you didn’t totally understand what I told you. I said Victoria Beckham and you thought it was David Beckham, maybe because for you boys, David Beckham is like an idol. Anyways, you need to be attentive all the time for you not to misunderstand what people are telling you specially that you you’re going to a foreign country. Always practice and apply your skills okay. See you tomorrow.
Lei J
P.S.
Here is a link where you can check Victoria Beckham’s hairstyle:
http://www.gossipcheck.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/04/victoria-beckham.jpg
hi- long time no see-
>>correcttoday was so funny-:)
>>correcti misunderstood your hairstyle-
>>I misunderstood your hairstylei understood that your hairstyle David vaccam(chickin style-)
>>I thought that your hairstyle is similar with David Beckham
so when i heard it form you i got shock:)
>>So when I heard about it I was shockedi tought like that'Lei.. your woman..
>>I told myself, “Lei you’re a woman”
i know..it's not easy try to David vaccam's style to the woman..:)
>>I know that for women, it’s not easy to have that hairstyle.- sorry for misunderstanding your say:)
>>Sorry for the misunderstanding i searched victoria's lately style- you must be gerouse:)
>>I searched victoria’s latest hairstyle, you must be gorgeousi am sorry to hear that philiiping's getting hot-...
>>I am soryy to hear the it is getting warmer in the Philippinesi can't stand hot weather in the korea..
>>correcti heard philiipin's much hotter than korea.. much.. ㅠ
>>I heard that Philippine’s clinateis much hotter than in Koreaif i can't stand there i'll gonna crazy:)
>>If I won’t be able to stand the weather, I’ll go crazywe have just 2days..ㅜㅜ it's really sad..
>>correctanyway- thank you:)
>>correctsee you-
>>correct
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