HI~Lina
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, It was rained in the morning.
But, The windy is bolwing hard after stop rain.
It's cold.
I went to other school to learn safe education.
I was so tired that I couldn't to learn education.
Because I went to go to bed at 4'a.m.
I have little time to sleep thses days.
Today, I have to go to dorm early this night.
Because I should be doing laundry.
To live alone is hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi John,Don't you like this kind of weather?I guess your pretty busy these days.aren't you feel tired?Well you know,living alone is good beacuse you are building independence by yourself but then it's hard because you have to shoulder all the things alone as well.I hope you can live with that.Relax and Smile!
LINA
Today, It was rained in the morning.>>Today, It was raining in the morning.But, The windy is bolwing hard after stop rain.>>But the wind blew hard after the rain stop.It's cold.>>Correct sentence
I went to other school to learn safe education.>>Correct sentenceI was so tired that I couldn't to learn education.>>I was so tired that I couldn’t learn.Because I went to go to bed at 4'a.m.
>>Because I went to bed at 4 a.mI have little time to sleep thses days.
>>I have little time of sleep these days.Today, I have to go to dorm early this night.
>>Today, I have to go to dorm early tonight.Because I should be doing laundry.>>Because I’ll be doing the laundry.To live alone is hard.
>>Correct sentence
>>to live alone is difficult. It can be
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