HI~ Lina.

2010-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 lina

학생이 쓴 원문

Today the wind is blowing hard. so, It is cold. I'm preparing my English presentation. It's very tough. It is a nuisance. But, I'm working on it. I want to sleep like a log. Lina, Thank you for encouraging me to study English. Bye~~

강사 첨삭

Hi John,Wow I'm very impress by your somposition. I didn't find any grammar errors. Congratulations for that. Though you wrote in phrases, Evry sentence has a complete thought. I sugget that next time you wrote down here,You write in paragraph form. Job well done.   -Lina     Today the wind is blowing hard.so, It is cold.I'm preparing my English presentation.It's very tough.It is a nuisance.But, I'm working on it.I want to sleep like a log.Lina, Thank you for encouraging me to study English.Bye~~  

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