HI~ Lina.

2010-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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Did you good a sleep last night? I was awake all night. I had a lot of thing to do. Today is exam. I'm nervous. I need some more time to get used to this. I'm hungry because I did'nt eat breakfast. I think health is more important to anyting else.

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Hi John, Yes, I had a good sleep last night. I guess you are really nervous but then you have to take a rest even for a while. So that you will have a relax [이름]d during the exam. You should eat as well your [이름]d can't concentrate if you're hungry.I hope you will get a good score. Just focus you can do it.Just like what you are in our class.Talk to you for our class.   Here are your corrections:   Did you good a sleep last night? >>Did you have a good sleep last night? I was awake all night. >>Correct sentence. I had a lot of thing to do. >>Correct sentence. Today is exam. >>Correct sentence. I'm nervous. >>Correct sentence. I need some more time to get used to this. >>Correct sentence. I'm hungry because I did'nt eat breakfast. >>Correct sentence. >>Didn’t. The correct use of apostrophe I think health is more important to anyting else. >>I think health is more important than anything else.  

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