HI~ Lina.

2010-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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What did you do for weekend? I drank with my friends. I felt upbeat for the first time in days. I prepare to go to bed. I have to early go a school tomarrow morning. I have to do a presentation. But, I haven't decided subject yet. I'm nervous. I'm sick and tired of going to school. I ends today with write english. You've really been a big help. Thank you~Lina. Good night~

강사 첨삭

Hi John.I had a great weekend, I spend lunch with my cousins and aunts. We had a chance to catch up with each other. Last Sunday I went to church to celebrate Easter mass. I feel reenergized.How about yours?I guess you had fun with your friends. It's my pleasure to help you John. You can lean on me anytime you may.   -Lina What did you do for weekend?>>What did you do on /during weekend? I drank with my friends. >>I drink with my friends.I felt upbeat for the first time in days. >> I felt beat up for the first time in many days. I prepare to go to bed. >>Correct sentence.I have to early go a school tomarrow morning.>>I have to go to school early morning tomorrow. I have to do a presentation. >>I need to do a presentation.But, I haven't decided subject yet. >>I haven’t decided about/what the subject yet.I'm nervous. >>Correct sentence.I'm sick and tired of going to school. >>Correct sentence.I ends today with write english. >>I will end my English writing for today.You've really been a big help. >>Correct sentence.Thank you~Lina.>>Correct sentence. Good night~        >>Correct sentence.    

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