HI~ Lina.
학생이 쓴 원문
What did you do for weekend?
I drank with my friends.
I felt upbeat for the first time in days.
I prepare to go to bed.
I have to early go a school tomarrow morning.
I have to do a presentation.
But, I haven't decided subject yet.
I'm nervous.
I'm sick and tired of going to school.
I ends today with write english.
You've really been a big help.
Thank you~Lina.
Good night~
강사 첨삭
Hi John.I had a great weekend, I spend lunch with my cousins and aunts. We had a chance to catch up with each other. Last Sunday I went to church to celebrate Easter mass. I feel reenergized.How about yours?I guess you had fun with your friends. It's my pleasure to help you John. You can lean on me anytime you may.
-Lina
What did you do for weekend?>>What did you do on /during weekend?
I drank with my friends.
>>I drink with my friends.I felt upbeat for the first time in days.
>> I felt beat up for the first time in many days.
I prepare to go to bed.
>>Correct sentence.I have to early go a school tomarrow morning.>>I have to go to school early morning tomorrow.
I have to do a presentation.
>>I need to do a presentation.But, I haven't decided subject yet.
>>I haven’t decided about/what the subject yet.I'm nervous.
>>Correct sentence.I'm sick and tired of going to school.
>>Correct sentence.I ends today with write english.
>>I will end my English writing for today.You've really been a big help.
>>Correct sentence.Thank you~Lina.>>Correct sentence.
Good night~
>>Correct sentence.
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