Hi Louis
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for your compliment. I just have read your feedback. You know my strong point and weak point also. I want to explain my oppinoin during the class. but... As your advice, i have to study more words.
I took a rest without any interruption in the weekend and I have recoverd my condition. I also hope you have had a good time in this weekend.
I made a plan to study english and russian after work. To keep this plan, i sat down infront of desk which is in my room and read some books. It is a very important accomplishment! because i havent set in a chair for half a year at home. After finding a job, i felt very exhausted at home, so i was very lazy like a couch potato. I decided to stop this behave and change my bad habits.
Anyway, have a good day and see you in the next class!!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you very much for your composition. I loved reading it. I always believe in you and in your abilities. I know that you'll succeed in everything you do. You just have to trust and believe in that, too! See you in a few hours. Take care.-Louise-
Thank you for your compliment.
>> Correct.
I just have read your feedback.
>> Correct.
You know my strong point and weak point also.
>> Correct.
Or
>> You know my strong point and also my weak point.
I want to explain my oppinoin during the class.
>> I want to explain my opinion during our class.
but... As your advice, i have to study more words.
>> But as what you have said, I have to study more words.
I took a rest without any interruption in the weekend and I have recoverd my condition.
>> I took a rest without any interruption this weekend and I have recovered my condition.
I also hope you have had a good time in this weekend.
>> Correct.
Or
>> I also hope you have had a good time this weekend.
I made a plan to study english and russian after work.
>> I made a plan to study English and Russian after work.
To keep this plan, i sat down infront of desk which is in my room and read some books.
>> To keep this plan, I sat down infront of desk which is in my room and read some books.
It is a very important accomplishment! because i havent set in a chair for half a year at home.
>> It is a very important accomplishment because I havent sat on a chair for half a year at home.
After finding a job, i felt very exhausted at home, so i was very lazy like a couch potato.
>> After finding a job, I felt very exhausted at home, so I was very lazy like a couch potato.
I decided to stop this behave and change my bad habits.
>> I decided to stop this behavior and change my bad habits.
Anyway, have a good day and see you in the next class!!
>> Correct.
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