Hi Louis

2012-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank you for your compliment. I just have read your feedback. You know my strong point and weak point also. I want to explain my oppinoin during the class. but... As your advice, i have to study more words. I took a rest without any interruption in the weekend and I have recoverd my condition. I also hope you have had a good time in this weekend. I made a plan to study english and russian after work. To keep this plan, i sat down infront of desk which is in my room and read some books. It is a very important accomplishment! because i havent set in a chair for half a year at home. After finding a job, i felt very exhausted at home, so i was very lazy like a couch potato. I decided to stop this behave and change my bad habits. Anyway, have a good day and see you in the next class!!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Thank you very much for your composition. I loved reading it. I always believe in you and in your abilities. I know that you'll succeed in everything you do. You just have to trust and believe in that, too! See you in a few hours. Take care.-Louise- Thank you for your compliment. >> Correct.  I just have read your feedback. >> Correct. You know my strong point and weak point also. >> Correct. Or >> You know my strong point and also my weak point. I want to explain my oppinoin during the class. >> I want to explain my opinion during our class. but... As your advice, i have to study more words. >> But as what you have said, I have to study more words. I took a rest without any interruption in the weekend and I have recoverd my condition. >> I took a rest without any interruption this weekend and I have recovered my condition.  I also hope you have had a good time in this weekend. >> Correct. Or >> I also hope you have had a good time this weekend. I made a plan to study english and russian after work. >> I made a plan to study English and Russian after work. To keep this plan, i sat down infront of desk which is in my room and read some books. >> To keep this plan, I sat down infront of desk which is in my room and read some books. It is a very important accomplishment! because i havent set in a chair for half a year at home. >> It is a very important accomplishment because I havent sat on a chair for half a year at home. After finding a job, i felt very exhausted at home, so i was very lazy like a couch potato. >> After finding a job, I felt very exhausted at home, so I was very lazy like a couch potato.  I decided to stop this behave and change my bad habits. >> I decided to stop this behavior and change my bad habits. Anyway, have a good day and see you in the next class!! >> Correct.

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