Hi Louise!
학생이 쓴 원문
I am also happy to see you. i came back the class after one week. I have taken a rest at morning for one week, and i had a good vacation with my girl friend even only two days. What were you doing for last week and weekend? I could not believe that Baguio's temperature in the morning gets down to 12 degrees! Actually i was wondering why you were wearing warm jacket in summer season. Different situations and life style between us are very attractive for me. :)
Let's go back to the homework, it is why celebrating GWANGBOKJEOL is important to Koreans. Beacause The day is that we got our nation back from Japan. People who have no nations or their nation is weak know existence of strong country is nesaccary condition in the world. If your country belonged to others, you would encounter much unfair and damage about basic right. A lot of koreans experience thses happen themselves and dont want forget it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름]! I hope you enjoyed your Independence Day! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job! Please go over the corrections/suggestions I have made towards your sentences. These will help you construct better and more grammatically correct sentences which you can use from day to day. We can talk some more about this during our next class. Take care and talk to you soon!
-----T. Louis-----
I am also happy to see you.
>>>CORRECT
i came back the class after one week.
>>>I came back for class after one week.
I have taken a rest at morning for one week, and i had a good vacation with my girl friend even only two days.
>>>I have taken a rest in the morning for one week and I had a good vacation with my girlfriend even if it was only for two days.
What were you doing for last week and weekend?
>>>What were you doing last week and during the weekend?
I could not believe that Baguio\'s temperature in the morning gets down to 12 degrees!
>>>CORRECT!
Actually i was wondering why you were wearing warm jacket in summer season.
>>>Actually I was wondering why you were wearing a warm jacket in the summer season.
Different situations and life style between us are very attractive for me. :)
>>>I find the different situations and life styles between us very attractive.Let\'s go back to the homework, it is why celebrating GWANGBOKJEOL is important to Koreans.
>>>CORRECT!
Beacause The day is that we got our nation back from Japan.
>>>Because it is the day that we got our nation back from Japan.
People who have no nations or their nation is weak know existence of strong country is
>>>People who have no nation or whose nation is weak know that the existence of a strong country is
nesaccary condition in the world.
>>>necessary in this world.
If your country belonged to others, you would encounter much unfair and damage about basic right.
>>>If your coutry belonged to others, you would encounter a lot of unfairness and damages on basic rights.
A lot of koreans experience thses happen themselves and dont want forget it.
>>>A lot of Koreans have experienced these themselves and cannot forget it.
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