Hi, Maria.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Maria.
It's a happy Friday. What have you been up to? I think I am doing well but I feel something's missing in my heart. I don't know what it is. It's hard to believe in someone. It's hard to be reliable someone.
I think I am a luncky person because I have a family and good health. I get a good gift from a god but I also feel lonely. What makes me much happier. What I should do?
Enjoy the rest of the evening.
See you soon.
[이름].
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!!
Happy happy Friday! I hope you have a great time tonight.
I\'m so sorry that you feel lonely but hey cheer up!!!!
I think that everyone goes through that kind of stage sometimes.
I myself have been there but thank God I was able to overcome it.
I think that loneliness is just a state of mind. It is actually a choice if you want to feel lonely.
So as I have said to you before, make some friends or get in touch with old friends or your family.
I\'m pretty sure that their presence would make you feel better.
The things that happen to us is always our own choice. See you. Take care.
~T.Maria~
Hi, Maria.
>> CorrectIt\'s a happy Friday. What have you been up to? I think I am doing well but I feel something\'s missing in my heart. I don\'t know what it is. It\'s hard to believe in someone.
>> Correct
It\'s hard to be reliable someone.>> It\'s hard to be reliable someone.
I think I am a luncky person because I have a family and good health.
>> Correct lucky
I get a good gift from a god but I also feel lonely.
>> I receive great gifts for God but why is it that I feel lonely.
What makes me much happier. What I should do?
>> What should make me happier. What should I do?Enjoy the rest of the evening.
>> Correct See you soon. [이름].
>> Correct
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