Hi, May~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~
I haven't known about this page from today.
So just say hello and ask something about our conversation.
During our studying, I told about my father's military service.
Do you remember?
I want to say, "My father was exempted from military service."
Is this right expression?
or how can I make a sentence with "exception"
"He was an exception from military service"?
Have a good day~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Great to hear from you. I like your question. We can discuss more about it tomorrow. See you in class.
Here are some minor corrections. Have a wonderful day ahead!
Teacher May
Hi, May~
>> Hi May!
Hi~
>>Hi!I haven't known about this page from today.
>>I didn't know about this page until today. So just say hello and ask something about our conversation.
>>So I jus want to say hello and ask something about our conversation.During our studying, I told about my father's military service.
>>During our class, I told about my father's military service.Do you remember?
>>CORRECTI want to say, "My father was exempted from military service."
>>CORRECTIs this right expression?
>>Is this right the expression?or how can I make a sentence with "exception"
>>How can I make a sentence using "exception""He was an exception from military service"?
>>My father's case was an exception. (it functions as a noun, other example :With a few minor exceptions, the new edition is much like the previous one.)Have a good day~
>>CORRECT
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