Hi, May~

2011-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Hi~ I haven't known about this page from today. So just say hello and ask something about our conversation. During our studying, I told about my father's military service. Do you remember? I want to say, "My father was exempted from military service." Is this right expression? or how can I make a sentence with "exception" "He was an exception from military service"? Have a good day~

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Hi [이름], Great to hear from you. I like your question. We can discuss more about it tomorrow. See you in class. Here are some minor corrections. Have a wonderful day ahead! Teacher May   Hi, May~ >> Hi May! Hi~ >>Hi!I haven't known about this page from today. >>I didn't know about this page until today. So just say hello and ask something about our conversation. >>So I jus want to say hello and ask something about our conversation.During our studying, I told about my father's military service. >>During our class, I told about my father's military service.Do you remember? >>CORRECTI want to say, "My father was exempted from military service." >>CORRECTIs this right expression? >>Is this right the expression?or how can I make a sentence with "exception" >>How can I make a sentence using "exception""He was an exception from military service"? >>My father's case was an exception. (it functions as a noun, other example :With a few minor exceptions, the new edition is much like the previous one.)Have a good day~ >>CORRECT

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