Hi May~

I am not sure that you will read this letter. (or Kelly, are you reading? :-) I've heard your are sick from Kelly whom I studied with today. so I am worried. How are you? Are you alright? I wish we can have a enjoyable talk tomorrow. see you soon.

Hi there, I hope teacher May can see you tomorrow and I hope she can still read your message for her.  Anyway, that is very kind of you to send a message to her. Maybe you like teacher May so much  Here are the corrections of your composition. Continue writing.   I am not sure that you will read this letter.>> I am not sure if you can read this letter. (or Kelly, are you reading? :-) >> CORRECT!I've heard your are sick from Kelly whom I studied with today. >> I've heard from Kelly whom I studied with today that you're sick.so I am worried. >> CORRECT!How are you? Are you alright? >> CORRECT!I wish we can have a enjoyable talk tomorrow. >> I wish we can have an enjoyable talk tomorrow.see you soon. >> CORRECT!