Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Mayleen!
I had a gorgeous day!
I took a picture with my Chines class friends.
We exchanged SNS ID for each other.
(And I want to know your ID too. I'm going to Philippines with my mom on next year. I want to meet you!)
As we find out, We have a famous person in the class.
She is the model of her country.
From tomorrow to next Monday is China holiday.
So We promised to go to anywhere on this holiday.
and Today~
My korean friend and I went shopping. I bought a few of T-shirt and a Slacks.
Along the way, We met a Chinese. He asked to us for Korea.
He gave me many questions and He wanted to be friends with us.
We exchanged contact information.
I'ii see you in our class!
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Happy Friday!
Wow! You forgot to tell me that you gained a new friend today-a Chinese friend. :)
Well, I cannot disclose my personal contact information so please understand.
But in case you\'ll really visit the Philipppines, just infor me and I\'ll recommend good places and delicious foods. ^_^
Have a great weekend!
_T. Mayleen :)
Hello, Mayleen!I had a gorgeous day!
>> Correct!I took a picture with my Chines class friends.We exchanged SNS ID for each other.
>> I took a picture with my Chines classmates and we exchanged SNS ID\'s.(And I want to know your ID too. I\'m going to Philippines with my mom on next year. I want to meet you!)
>> Correxct!As we find out, We have a famous person in the class.She is the model of her country.
>> We found out that we have a famous classmate. She\'s a model here in China.From tomorrow to next Monday is China holiday.So We promised to go to anywhere on this holiday.
>> Starting tomorrow until Monday, it\'s holiday in China. We promised to go some places.and Today~My korean friend and I went shopping. I bought a few of T-shirt and a Slacks.
>> Today, my KOrean friend and I went shopping. I bought a few tshirts and a slacks.Along the way, We met a Chinese. He asked to us for Korea.He gave me many questions and He wanted to be friends with us.We exchanged contact information.>> Along the way, we met a Chines who asked about Korea. He had a lot of questions. He wanted us to be friends so we exchanged contact informations.I\'ii see you in our class!
>> I\'ll see you in class!Thank you!
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