Hi, Mayleen!

2017-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Creative Writing: Choose just one (1) topic and answer in not more than five (5) sentences.^-^ Can you tell me about.. a) ..something you regret? b) ..something you would happily do again? c) ..one of your grandparents? Can you tell me about.. a) ..something you regret? First of all, I regret that I did not spend much time with my children on a younger date. Secondly, it is regrettable that there was no more courage in everything. Finally, I regret that I missed a little more studying and didn't meet the necessary mentors when I was a student.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)


Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

We all have regrets.


Life is full of mistakes, some we learn by and some we live by.

We all have decisions, events, and times we wish we could take back.

In a way, it\'s a miracle in itself that we don\' always get another shot to correct our mishaps.

You see, if you didn’t make mistakes and have regrets, you wouldn\'t be the person you\'ve grown into today.

[theodysseyonline]


_T. Mayleen :)


First of all, I regret that I did not spend much time with my children on a younger date.
>>> First of all, I regret that I did not spend much time with my children when they\'re still young.

Secondly, it is regrettable that there was no more courage in everything.
>>> Secondly, it is regrettable that I don\'t have enough courage to do everything.


Finally, I regret that I missed a little more studying and didn\'t meet the necessary mentors when I was a student.

>>> Finally, I regret that I missed a few things when I was still studying and that I didn\'t get to meet excellent mentors as a student.

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