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2017-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What is something a boss can do to motivate his workers? Give at least one. ^.^ Answer in 3 to 5 sentences. If I were a boss, I think the best motivator for my employees is giving incentives. Because everyone who works at work wants more pay, the best way to motivate is to pay more. In particular, a job with a certain sense of mission can be the best motivator, to frequently recall a sense of mission.

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Hi [이름]!

How\'s your day today? Thank you for having a class with me yesterday! See you around ^^

T. DON

If I were a boss, I think the best motivator for my employees is giving incentives.

>> If I were a boss, I think the best motivator for my employees is by giving them incentives.

Because everyone who works at work wants more pay, the best way to motivate is to pay more.

>> Because every employee who works hard wants to get compensated and the best way to motivate them is to increase their salary.

In particular, a job with a certain sense of mission can be the best motivator, to frequently recall a sense of mission.

>> In particular, a job with a certain goal, mission and vision can be the best motivator.

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