Hi, Mayleen!
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강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for this composition.
I have read it well. I agree that we cannot avoid to make mistakes nor wrong choices and we\'ll have to live with it.
However, there will always be a chance for us to fix things -- maybe it\'s not now, not today, but in the future.
I will see you then tomorrow!
_T. Mayleen :)
Life itself is a series of choices every day, and by doing so, it is often wrong to choose to our daily affairs, unless we are God.
>>> Life itself is a series of choices every day, and by doing so, it is often wrong to choose what to do and what not to do unless you are God.
I make as many wrong choices as I do.
>>> I make as many wrong choices as others do.
For example, I think that if I had done business, I would have made more money and had a better life for my family.
>>> For example, I think that if I had put up a business before, I would have made more money and provided a better life for my family.
Every human being has a feeling for a job he or she hasn\'t had, so he or she always thinks whether the old choices were wrong.
>>> Every human being has a an emotional attachment to a job and he or she hasn\'t had, so he or she always thinks whether his/her old/past choices were wrong.
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