Hi, mayleen!

2018-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Name an event from last year (2017) that you think has affected your life directly or indirectly. Answer in not more than 5 sentences. ^^,) Firstly, Last year was the most meaningful year in my life, it is that my daughter married. The wish for my daughter is always to live a healthy and happy life. Secondly, through restraint of the current president and the election of a new president , I think young people thoughts are much different from older people.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^

Happy Friday!

I guess you\'re right. What happened to your politics changed the mindset of people, most specially the younger generation.

I know you\'ll never stop guiding your daughter even though she\'s already married.

Thank you so much for answering your homework.^^ Have a fun and safe weekend!

_T. Mayleen :)

Firstly, Last year was the most meaningful year in my life, it is that my daughter married.

>>> Firstly, last year was the most meaningful year in my life because it\'s when my daughter got married.
The wish for my daughter is always to live a healthy and happy life.

>>> I wish for my daughter to always live a healthy and happy life.
Secondly, through restraint of the current president and the election of a new president , I think young people thoughts are much different from older people.

>>> Lastly, the impeachment of the former president and the election of the new president changed the mindset of young people here in my country.

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